All Comments on 'Holiday Memories'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really?

The damn story just ended... That part sucked! Otherwise well told.

gordo12gordo12over 8 years ago
Well done

But I agree it ended a little too abruptly. 4*

Bray123Bray123over 8 years agoAuthor
To be continued...

Stand by for chapter two. By the way, this story is based on a series of semi-autobiographical events, one of which was actualy recounted to me last week as a reminiscence by one of the participants...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great story

looking forward to part 2

wwaldripwwaldrip8 days ago

Excellent holiday or week away. Can’t wait for chapter two

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