by Bray123
The damn story just ended... That part sucked! Otherwise well told.
But I agree it ended a little too abruptly. 4*
Stand by for chapter two. By the way, this story is based on a series of semi-autobiographical events, one of which was actualy recounted to me last week as a reminiscence by one of the participants...
looking forward to part 2
Excellent holiday or week away. Can’t wait for chapter two