All Comments on 'Holiday Romance?'

That was a great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is very good indeed. It starts with a great first line. Your bar scene is very nicely set up, and as the story develops you work hard and successfully to describe the narrator’s sensations and feelings in detail. Very arousing as a result! Thank you!

Sevenpillars

Thanks all for your kind feedback! I'm hoping to have a follow up shortly...

Got me hooked, on to chapter 2