All Comments on 'Holiday Suprise'

by Hawke77

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yep, there is always New Year

By then you should be single and too far gone to care about.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Maybe

Maybe a drill, or lawnmower, but never my wife. If I ever have one. I do have a house, with twenty forested acres, lots of guns, and a shovel, neighbor.

Hawke77Hawke77about 4 years agoAuthor
Sharing my Lawnmower for Christmas

The title of my next story. I'm sure a lot of people looking for an adult sex story will want to read about that! Seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Well I guess he really didn’t care that much about her

I am sure he won’t share his favorite album or prized putter, but his wife sure. What’s that say about him? He values his buddy more than his wife and she isn’t really that precious or valuable since he easily shared her. Just another story for the cucks to enjoy and write about trolls who are only trolls because they don’t share the perverted desire to be a second class citizen in what was once an exclusive relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I loved it!

Great story and fabulous fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Ever notice that all nbcs look exactly the same

Genetic dead ends.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 4 years ago

Hot AF.

I loved this one. Thank you, very much!

Hawke77Hawke77almost 4 years agoAuthor

I am always amazed how many people will read all the way through a story with a plot that they hate, just so they can complain about the plot. It's funny, really.

DeereJohn65DeereJohn65almost 4 years ago
You're Assuming, Hawke

Hawke .... you are making the assumption that they are actually reading it before they make their inevitable slam on the story. I believe that these sad trolls just have their hateful comments preloaded and they just go directly yo the comments section and unload as quickly as they can before moving on the the next story

WolpheyWolpheyover 3 years ago
Actually I think they do read it.

DearJohn65, I think they love reading these stories but then feel repulsed at themselves and take it out on the authors.

Hawkeye77, well written, I enjoy a story from the wife's point of view. Nicely done!!!

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
ABSOLUTELY GREAT 👍 STORY

Great story...fun to read...hot..erotic.. and wife sharing done correctly..husband present.. same room..involved... supporting his wife... enjoying the erotic pleasures with her... NOT some whore running off behind her husbands back..didn't want it to end... 5 stars

Hawke77Hawke77over 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you!

Hawke77Hawke77over 3 years agoAuthor

Sigh.... Whatever. I guess you think that the purpose and name of this forum is REVENGE ON Slutty Wives! If you spent the time to read the whole story and masturbated, I just hope you cleaned your fingers before you typed in your disdain for it.

luvtodoitluvtodoitabout 3 years ago

5*

I loved this very sexy story. I've had threesomes with my wife, watching her kiss another man is a huge turn on for me, and there was lots of that here. Slipping my cock into her cum filled pussy is also hard to beat.

CYOAWitchesCYOAWitchesalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic tale - love it!

SamuelDexterSamuelDexterabout 2 years ago

No character development. No real story setup just fuck and suck. Boring really

Hawke77Hawke77about 2 years agoAuthor

Honest critique, thank you. However, for some people here, that is all they want.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

HOT story. Thanks.

Ed

kwalankwalan6 months ago

great sensual loving wife husband cumming with friend

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