All Comments on 'Holidays in the Sun'

A new story line, you got the last part right, however the actor that said " you would not like me when I am angry" was not Arnie, it was Bill Bixby in the first Incredible Hulk not sure if you meant to be mistaken, if you were sorry

Very well done! And very yummy too! Thank you!

Thank you as always for reading, commenting and . . . I hope . . . enjoying.

I did deliberately get my 30-something confused between the two famous quotes from years before she was born. And I let her get the second one right on the law of averages.

Thank you for reading and taking time to comment. And above all thank you for enjoying the story.

Superb. I loved the humour... the 'horny northern lass' 1st-person narrator totally worked for me. And the continuation seems to be the recently-posted 'Sex on the Beach'.... Cool.....

This is the first of your stories I have read, (I intend to read more) I love the style of it and the way the story is told. best of all, sex with humour is a wonderful thing, all well illustrated here. Thank you.