All Comments on 'Holly and (What's Left of) the City Pt. 05'

This chapter was amazing. I was actually getting worried for Holly at the end, but it would seem that inflating 1000 girls is entirely within her realm of expertise. Many of those girls, if not most, are perma-pregged now. Who knows what Valencia looks like!

Now we know Holly will do anything for Maria, so will she hold back or go more all out than ever before? To be honest I want to see another flattened city to add to Holly's list ; ) That being said I also think it would be sweet to see Holly continue their relationship with a couple of children (just a dab of Holly's seed) and for Maria to be able to work beside her.

Just some thoughts.

Glad you liked it. Chapter 6 should be out in about 2 weeks.

As for where this is going, I'm pretty sure it'll surprise you but we'll have to wait and see :-)