All Comments on 'Holly Jolly, THAT WAS MOLLY?!?!'

2 more people in the house and they're snowed in? This story isn't even CLOSE to being over. Please finish this out!

The part about going outside and fucking was so...stupid, unrealistic, unnecessary. Forget the boyfriend, now get mom into it, threesome.

Excellent Read ! Keep it UP :-0)

Definitely more chapters to be had !

Sex in the snow is AMAZING!! Especially when you're rolling. Excellent story. I came twice before I could finish the story.

As someone who loves outdoor sex that was amazing. I wish it snowed more here because that is amazing.

Yes in the snow. This is possible and many people do it. On E it is easy as your body temp rises. This happens Especially when you are young and live with your parents. They didn't do molly they did Extasy. Molly comes in a capsule not a pill. They would have started rolling sooner taking two Mollys and could have overdosed. Never mind 3 in a night with no one Throwing up is funny. The boyfriend only drank beer how he never woke once to piss and check on her is beyond me. He should have joinedD

As New Years Eve approach, she wanted to repeat this experience and tell her Daddy that since he had cum inside her unprotected, she’s now carrying his baby! Happy New Years Daddy!!!!

Great read.., a real nice flow to the story. More would be good

Another 5 star performance. Now about New Years Eve..... bahahaha

This was an excellent story!!

Sexy and clever cum down the chimney. Yum

Wish that was my cock fucking the Hell out of his beautiful, sexy, and SLUTTY DAUGHTER.

Hope you add another chapter of the next night. Maybe Mom can take a pill and her BF can fuck the shit out of her. What a fantastic 4 way.

5 stars and MORE

And funny. I went off at the line "Her father was fucking her without a condom on the floor. Her father was fucking her pussy. Her dad. No...her Daddy." Man oh man.

But you mis-spelled a few things. Affect instead of effect, pealed instead of peeled, and a few others I forget.

Such intriguing writing. I love the intertextuality and allusion you used for imagery it really kept it hilarious and interesting!

What is up with all the people who aren't happy until it's a big fuckfest with like 6 people getting it on all at once? This is barely plausible, and has it's own intimacy. Getting the whole family in on it would just be silly, and you couldn't pay enough attention to each single character to make it worth it.

Thoroughly enjoyed every sentence. Can’t wait to read your other stories!

"Hey dad lets play the secret striptease mode on just dance"

Fuck you that ruined my immersion thats the dumbest shit i seen in my entire life

and dirty... the way I like to read it! ;)

Hot and articulate, american english shortcomings notwithstanding. i'll surely read your other stories (i don't bother with capitals, unless app inserts them).

I love this story, it is so hot and makes me wish i had a daddy if my own. I would love to see what happens for these characters

Whether you add another chapter or not, it was a great story for what it is - erotica. I had to read the story from beginning to end. Wish my daughter and I could go on a trip like that.

AWESOME story. Loved it!!! Spent the whole thing with my cock in my hand gettimg more and more worked up

This is beyond hot. I keep checking back every month to see if there is a new chapter I'm that besotted by this story. So many orgasms.

That's 5-star work, right there!

Very clever story with grad school level writing. Unexpectedly fun!

What a wonderful little tale . If I could give you 10 stars I would.

this needs a follow up, but first get rid of the boyfriend

I agree that it needs a part two but also that it should continue with just her and her father in the sexual roles and not bringing in the mother or boyfriend. Awesome job!

Holy shit! This might be the hottest story I have read in ages. You have upped the game!

Great story. Would have given it a 5 instead of a 4 withe better editing.

11/10 MDMAs!!!!!

Super hot story, love the buildup.

That was an amazing story!

Jeremy and Rebecca should have been busy upstairs

Fantastic story! The sex was great. Thank you for a wonderful story. However, your prose flows so seamlessly that I wished I was in the room, enjoying the warmth of the fireplace and the delicious dinner! (Sorry, I am a bit hungry)

Please write a similar story, but with son and mom!!

Too short, there was so much more you could have done with it just to end out of seemingly nowhere.

Great story, not bothered by any editing mistakes! Intentions are clear as a bell. And just wish for this one to become a series. Or a more detailed rewrite maybe if a series is out of the realm of possibilities!

Keep writing this type of material, you are awesome!!!

Fuck yes

The largeness of your largess feeds the hunger of my lewdness

Need a PART 2 ASAP

Very hot story. Well written

Oh yeah. Great story and well written too. Needs a second chapter to bring mother into the pot . . . .

So hot! Part two please!!

Really steamy story. Great read.

You can write! Really write! So fucking hot. I'm not usually into the daddy thing but now I am. Kink unlocked! I love that you put anal in your stories. Her fingering his ass, him fucking her, then rimming each other. So, so good.