All Comments on 'Holly's Adventure'

Which is par for the course on these stories or is it her husband? personally I would it be her husband. But that wouldn't match up to other stories would it?

All this woman thinks about is herself and her cunt--he should get rid of her--she will be a cheating skank.

All this woman thinks about is herself and her cunt--he should get rid of her--she will be a cheating skank.

This woman is so self centered and "I me" is all she thinks about. Kick her slut ass to the curb before she causes problems.

Reading this was like riding on a road full of potholes.<p>Flipping between tenses, incomplete sentences, mangled words... I could go on, but those will do for a start.<p>Didn't like the subject matter, but that isn't my issue here. I just didn't like the sloppy writing.

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Well done... you kept driving the reader towards a possible dalliance outsude the marriage, then finished it with an abrupt left turn to a surprise and totally unexpected ending.

Please keep writing !

Selfish bitch is going to cheat.