All Comments on 'Holy Order of Revisionist Saints Ch. 01'

Can’t wait to see what you got!

Thank god this isn't another cuckold fantasy story, I'm glad I kept reading although I wish he'd just left the whole place, still ended good.

Women of the Holy Order of Revisionist Saints

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Coincidence? Maybe... I still laughed so hard I almosed pissed myself. You made my day. Intentionally or not. Thank you!

Seconding what the other anon said. These type of stories too often are filled with cuck shit. Thank you for writing a man with a backbone.

That was an unexpectedly good story! I liked that very much. Hopefully it will go on like this!

Now that was a lot of fun

4/5

You started losing me with the "and now you're a cuck" part and "real man" was the last straw. I came to the comments to say so, and the other comments made me go back and finish the story.

Great job!

I apologize for the low marks but I could not follow the rational of the story. I won't read any more science fiction.

Thanks

While probably not intended, this is a pretty good comparison to feminism in the western world.

Below a comment referred to this a science fiction tale but probably more fact than they have noticed.

Exciting tale looking forward to where this will go. Great start. 4.5*

So this was fucking stupid…not even gonna bother