All Comments on 'Home Ch. 03'

Another great installmant! keep em coming kat! im eating them up ;)

I want more of this one please, i am loving Peyton and Nate so much

Keep the chapters coming. So sweet of both Nate and Peyton to revealed their scars to get other. But wow Addison is a lunatic! Peyton needs to kick her ass and put her in her place or something...lol But great chapter

this was a really touching chapter..... you made me cry!!

beautifully written

*****

YESSSSSSSSSS, THIS IZ WAT A TRUE WRITER IZ ALL ABOUT

NO HOLDS BARED I LIKE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

WRITE SOME MORE I CAN'T WAIT

Great read. I wonder where you are going to take it from here.

xD amazing! keep up the great work!

need more!!! love this story, keep it up!

Five.

Seriously, a five-star story. And then there's that element of pointing out the importance of communication. Excellent work.

As the story goes along, I never expected them to have experienced some of the same hurts; maybe that is why they are drawn to one another. Good read...

See that?? Bitch like that ruins men and then the rest of us have to deal with damaged goods! How fucked up is that????...and real!!!

Touching make up

" Even the worst of all truths outweighs the sweetest of lies. "

Brilliant :)...and thank you for your kind comments, in case you didn't get my email.

I feel like it's too rushed which makes me not able to really relate to the characters. You would never just tell someone your deepest darkest, secrets/fears unless you really truly knew them and trusted them. I feel like Nate and Peyton haven't really known each other that long so the story is almost...fake. Unrealistic. But I feel like you have a lot of potential as a writer and if you took the time to slow down the story a little bit more, all of this will be fixed.

Sincerely,

DominiqueFrazier.

I think sometimes in these stories the love is so fast. This story is good but I do believe it would be more real to some of the readers if the love did not happen so fast.

you hoes make it seem like it was horrible, it wasnt that bad, just a little rushed ;l i like, you should have lengthen it to where they build up their trust instead of trusting each other completely but yeah its not that bad