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by ImChris

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Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 3 years ago

The change from third person (he, him, his) to first person after the word "filled" was jarring. Perhaps some editor help might not be amiss in the future.

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Married couple in their 40's taking a stroll on a slightly wilder side. Who knows how deep they go. He writes the stories, she gets really turned on.