by writerannabelle
HO HO HO BITCH!!! LMAOOO I fucking LOVE it!!! Annabelle, you fucking ROCK girl!!!
5 stars only because that's the max they allow.
10 Stars.
I'm crying because I'm afraid Master Cyrus will die, but what a pure loving act of heroism.
What an amazing story. Way too many high points to thumb type with these damn watering eyes...
Love this story so much.
FDD
Oh no!!! I caught up again!
And Mike is about to arrive.
Crap, crap, crap. This is soooo good, and I gotta wait weeks? -- Mr.Ric
Ok Miss Hawthorne,
You make me smile. You make me wait to feel the next shard of reality you presence from the infinite. I feel grateful and blessed that you do.
WOW!!!!
Way to go Master Cyrus!
Very VERY well written ma'am.
Thank you so much for another great episode!!!
"Callisto could go up the stairs without any difficulty, but it was still physically demanding."
Those seem at odds with each other.
Otherwise great chapter, but sometimes in near-perfection do the flaws stand out the most...
Wow! Death with brass knuckles made me laugh and Grace saying Poppa up brought tears of joy!
Your stories have me captivated. Death has became a favorite character. I laughed out loud as he punched Elizabeth with the jingle bell brass knuckles. Thank you for your talent as a writer. Can't wait for each part of this take.
Oh My how do you have a story that just gets better and better with each chapter. You're truly an artist using words to create both a world and characters to live in it. Thanks...5/5
Great chapter. Am I the only one dying to know what happened to Jenny? She was taking the wicked witch to Oz, then the witches turned up again without her. Jenny needs a chance to do a serious smackdown. After all, the Horsemen only wanted to end the world, but with the witch, it's personal.
Even in this cast full of great characters, to me, Jenny stands out as something special.
I've now read this for the third time, and it is just as thrilling each time. I replay scenes in my head, when I don't have other thoughts there. If Master Cyrus survives, and I hope he does, he will have earned healing from Zel and a non-soul-stealing/damaging blow job from Lily that the members of the Order believe he is already getting.
Can only punch the five star once bu6t you deserve five times that many. to keep us entertained this long, must be your therapy. KEEP WRITTING, and we will keep reading.
OMG!! I wish you could write faster, because I can't get enough of this amazing story!! Also, I was fully expecting Cyrus to die, but am still holding out hope that he can be saved and will join the family along with a certain werewolf, along with a certain witch...
"Anonymous3 days ago
"Callisto could go up the stairs without any difficulty, but it was still physically demanding."
Those seem at odds with each other."
Callisto, being a centaur with four hooved legs, would normally have difficulty with stairs but with the magic bracelet he transformed to humanoid which removed said difficulty. Running up stairs even as a human can be physically demanding. not at odds :)
great story Ms Annabelle!! insert gif of Fry demanding you take my stars
Master Cyrus is on the ropes, BUT WAIT! It's...the Grim Reaper and he's got Santa Claus' Brass Knuckles!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Great story!
Also can't wait for the next books to become available on amazon.
Oh, Goddess, what a good one! I only comment every 20 chapters or so but this one may have been the best. Master Cyrus indeed, and in deed. Beth was wondrous as well. Thank you Annabelle.
Oh my gods!!!!!! Just the last full paragraph was worth the five stars.
The writing is outstanding. Your large action scenes are easier to understand than most movies today. And you build a tangible sense of peril. Somehow in the middle of all of it you make me laugh out loud. Every chapter has surprises that I didn’t anticipate and know I couldn’t have imagined. Death’s Santa knuckles are as good as how the Fairy Queen handles the prisoners at Mike’s house.
Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us
OK, yes I’m one of the lucky ones that got to start in the future. I have to say this was one of my favorite Chapters of the whole series. Having the Mike’s kids involved in this chapter has Pulled out my heartstrings a little bit. I can’t wait to What happens next? Thanks for all you do.
Another great chapter. Only that I am starting to feel Grandpa Cyrus will leave us. I absolutely love how you wave the stories insde the story.