All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 023'

As always you are a master at writing. I did see a few grammar errors and what not. But you did a superb job. Please dont ever stop. This is like my favorite story ever.

Geeeeeez this chapter was just so damn good.

This was a very good chapter. Ratu is already among my favorites of the ladies. I can't wait for more!

Hot snake girl sex. Me like a lot 😍😘

I thought that I knew a lot of the world's myths, but you keep surprising me with new ones or details of ones I knew little about.

Annabelle you continue to amazing and impress me. Once again, I thank you for another thrilling chapter of Mike and his many lady monsters. I've lately been reading other interesting Literotica stories, and I am finding so many of your fellow writers can not spell worth a darn. You are a joy to read, with almost no mistakes; good writing and good editing as well, thank you so much! More please.

Annabelle,

I love your writing and really like the new girl too. I cannot wait for more, really hoping that Dana gets some good luck thrown her way.

Thank you and keep up the great work! Haven’t looked forward to a story with magic and witchcraft this much since the Harry Potter series.

Another enjoyable chapter, and FOUR pages this time. I may have to reread some parts since I think I got some parts mixed up and forgot a few details from the previous chapter about Ratu’s appearance. I had a little difficulty keeping up with the school part of the story, but they have been partially due to the fact I couldn’t read the whole chapter at once today. I really wanted to read it though!

If there are any artists willing to volunteer, you should try to get someone to do some basic illustrations of the main characters and the house. It would be nice to see how you envision the characters when creation their stories.

This was an excellent chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.

I did not expect that to be spooky BUT IT WAS.

I loved the chase scene, you mix horror, and romance so well together, and I'm defenetely not complaining about sexy snek girl

Another awesome job. Can’t wait for next chapter

and i love the sexy snake girl!

This has grown to be one of my all time favorite stories so far. I love the way you mix story with more intimate sections, and they always feel natural (as natural as fantasy sex can :P ).

Keep up the fantastic work, i look forward to seeing new chapters popping up. :D

Many thanks,

Kaleb ^^

Just Wow!

🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 !

I love especially the reference to 'The Labyrinth'!

this was exactly what i needed to fill my night, thank you, i will always happily read more.

That was totally AWESOME!!! I look forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for bringing my childhood nightmare back to life! Baba Yaga is alive and kicking, who knew. Thank you for the wonderful chapter!!!!!!!

Another amazing chapter as always! Love this story so much it is by far my favourite on literotica, I can’t wait to meet some more new characters I hope you introduce a male so mike can explore a bit ;) or maybe even a futa!!

I almost missed this, thank the spirits i decided to browse literotica today. I would not have been happy if your story had passed me by, it's a highlight of my day..

There's a story on here about another snake girl named Medusa's Fate sorry can't remember name of member's user name. Bits of it will make you chuckle.

Em.

Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

Such a great tale, how do we get you writing full time? The wait between chapters is killing me. Keep going.

This was one of your best chapters yet. It was a lot of fun. Your story telling is simply amazing. Keep up the great work.

I've been following since the first post and have been through a big rough patch lately and I realized how much I love your writing. It's been incredibly hard lately but your amazing writing is one of the things that I have that I look forward to. Thank you for bringing this amazing story to life.

Another great chapter can’t wait for the next one. Can’t hep but relate to mike radley it’s hard when you feel as though you don’t fit in or feeling like an outsider. Thank you Annabelle. Lovely story

Thank you again for this fun story. Many authors back themselves into corners with their plots. You just keep adding threads and opportunities for branches to the core story. Every branch has been fun to explore.

Keep the adventures coming but please do not burn out.

Ok I am still addicted to your story. Very well written and thought out. so.... when is the next one

Very fun. And good job on the research, it really helped the story "feel real".

great I love this story keep it up and the snake is great

Ahhh, finally a Naga. Thank you for this one. By far my favorite so far. I hope you can continue with other reptilian as well. Even with her again a couple times.

Great story so far. I'm definitely going to buy the book once it's done.

As always I greatly enjoyed this and can't wait to see how everything unfolds.

Wow. Great story. I come back here every week hoping you've updated. When is the next one?

As always 10 stars.. keep adding characters to the house. Or is it let the house add more to the story

Gave me chills (pun i intended). Reading your preface, I also remembered that I've been following this series for a year now after finding the first one in my recommendations. I've never commented only because I never usually do. But believe me, it's like a ritual to me. Every month check in on maniastream for the latest chapter of Attack on Titan and One Punch Man them remember to check back ablondegoddess, emmeline, kousakacomplex and your page for the updates. Unlike some, you don't disappoint. So thank you. And stay safe.

BTW I loved reading about Baba Yaga from Eastern European folklore. And hope might incorporate se Hindu mythology next. For being the only surviving ancient polytheistic religion, I'm sad that its mythology is not very popular. Anyway, ciao.

Still here enjoying your yarns. Doesn't seem possible it's been a year, still enoying the heck out of your work

Loving the story, absolutely loving Ratu, would love more from her, loving the femdomesk feel and would love some body/booty worship with her

Just brilliant. You've got a great imagination and are obviously doing a lot of research into myths and such like. Very well done. Your completed story could make a Hollywood blockbuster.

fucking amazing as usual.

-sigh-

you have a talent! <3

Tink might just be my favorite "monster."

I so look forward to each new installment, although patience is not necessarily my forte.

Keep up the not just good but great work!

I'm so glad that this series is still going on. It's just incredible!!

Great, as usual from you... For me, Lily is my favorite monster... Missing her already!

Keep it coming Annabelle there is nothing like a fantasy as an antidote to this cruel, shitty world we inhabit.

Fill it with love and mix it with glee,

then bake in the oven for baby and me.

A fan.

I’m on edge for the next chapter

I stumbled upon your story series while browsing and I have to say, I'm glad that I found this one! A well written and enthralling story, with rich and fully fleshed out characters to go along with! Not to mention all the hot and steamy sex with the monster girls! I am glad that you included a monster guy or two, which helps keep things fresh and shaken up! 5 stars! As a fellow author here, I sure hope that you keep on keeping on!

Love the labyrinth reference, and the series in general

I loved the middleschool troubles it felt so real and connected. Good job on the research. I wait so patiently for my monthly read of this story.

I’m well and truly hooked.

Thanks for your stories they rocked my world.

I’ve not been this into anything for quite a while.

An on the edge of your chair chapter again. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how they get out of this affair. Love the reads

I Need More.

Can't wait until you write another chapter.

It makes my day to check and find a new chapter! Can't wait to see what happens with Dana!

Your stories never let me down ..please keep them coming

your stories are great, sex being only part o the magic. Don't stop

Love the story so far can’t wait for the next one,

*raises fists in air and chants*

DRAGONS! DRAGONS! DRAGONS! (Repeat)

I love this story a lot. You have done a great job of it. Keep up the great work! Nagas are perhaps my favorite mythical creatures. My three suggestions for other girls to add would be a Satyr, Kobold and a Dragon.

I have been following this story since chapter 4 and you keep getting better and better! I love the sex and creatures! So glad you brought back Tink too. Keep going and when you publish a book I want a signed copy!!!

You’re such a good author! Keep it up! Write faster!

Why is it only the blue fairy? Give the other 2 some Mike juice. In fact, give all 3 at the same time. I’ve always fancied the thought of fairies hiding in clothing. Coming out at the right time to strike evil, unexpected. Except this could be sexy.

Definitely need a cute slime girl, or maybe a hellhound girl! This is absolutely amazing by the way. I’ve been reading this story for a few days and I can’t wait for more!!

Great read as always, keeps getting better and better.

thanks for sharing

I just want to thank you for the best story ive read here. I absolutly love it. I dont want it to ever end.

Just catching up on the story to remind me where we are and to determine whether a naga is a snake with tits or a woman with a tail. I'll take either, Good ole Wikipedia.

your stories are a great read and a fun time love the sex and the different monsters just love this series thanks hope you keep it interesting

Love how you handled Ratu, glad you weren't shy about using a Naga's reptilian side. I think you handled this chapter very well!

So, I've read this far without leaving you a comment. It's about time I do. Thank you for creating such a wonderfully engrossing and entertaining story. I've always been an avid reader with science fiction and fantasy being the top genres for me.

Mystery, suspense, good writing skills, they all combine together to keep the author's audience an active participant and I am thoroughly enjoying being a participant in the weave you are creating for us here.

Write as long as you feel the story needs to be and I will follow to the end, wherever and whenever that may be.

Thank you

I love the way Jenny talks.

I'm sure there must be a saying about going Green.

Usually when reading a harem style of story, I find myself being attached to one or two of the girls, but I love all the horny girls of the house so much. From Naia to stretchy little Blue to Tink and the rest that I’m too lazy to type the names of, I love them all for their differences, even Beth and the tragic Dana. Great writing and thanks for all the prep work needed to bring a naga into the fold, Ratu is a great addition.

I can't stop reading.

As the title claims i've been a big fan of Lit. Its been a special place i keep coming to when i feel comfortable. But Never have i Ever left a comment here on Lit. WriterAnnabelle! I love your writing soo very much!! I love each and every member of the HFHM! (Not excluding the ones i have yet to meet!) The way your words unfold the images in my brain is especially special to me (maybe i have a soft spot for your beautiful creatures). This chapter had me sweating under my blanket as i was reading!! (And i didnt even realize until i felt the relaxation of Mike and Ratu [which was steaming Hot by the way] ) XD. Oh this is so great. Im so very glad everyone else loves it as much as me so i dont have to wait to read the next chapter!!! Hehe selfish me. I cant wait to read more of your writing!!!!

P.S. how do you pronounce Naia? Nai-ya or na-ii-ya or nay-ii-a or nay-ya? Hahaha all are so sexy to me. I just wish i could hear her voice.

Best wishes, xoxo

Jskk

I have been interested in mythology for a long time. I just love these stories. The story line, and descriptions of characters and places keep getting better as I read each new entry. Really draws you in and keeps me coming back. And then there is the sex! Very hot.

I started reading this saga after buying "Radley's Home for Horny Monsters" on Amazon, and then discovering that I could continue with part 13 over here on Literotica. This was the best chapter yet! I just loved it! I know you keep writing at least as far as part 45 (as of now) so I've got a ways to go yet. I hope you keep going. What a wonderful tale!

Annabelle, if you could hold the snake, I'll fuck it and let ya know what its feel like

Annabelle my dear,

I absolutely love this story. How many cultures are you going to use mythologies from? At first, due to some gaelic words I believed you were focusing on Irish, but just in the last few chapters you have added, Norse, Indian or Indonesian, and Russian.

You are a magnificent writer, clearly well read, and you do some research. All things that also impress me, as they seem so rare in most erotica. Please don't neglect Kokopelli and the other Trickster Gods. I'm imagining some sort of game or contest between that class of Gods, that could be hysterical.

Now the, damn you, I have been so caught up in your work, that I have neglected my own. I try to write a 10,000 word chapter a month, I'm behind this month. But I'm almost 20 chapters ahead anyway.

As a very bi, actually tri woman, I was very pleased to see you point out that scissoring isn't the best way for two women to be intimate.

Sorry for the length of my comments, I've been told I'm verbose.

kisses amyMac, a writer elsewhere

Loved the Ratu scene. I like that Mike is growing and becoming more actively helpful than just dumb, stupid luck helpful! I also like how Ratu and Mike come together, the bonding, overcoming death together.

First off, the starting bit in Baba Yagas' soul middle school place was actually kind of scary. Not that it's a bad thing. I think it would have been funny if Mike some how got Baba Yagas' peg leg off her and she had to crawl around. Though it would ruin the story so, I'm okay with out it.

Secondly, every time I read Baba Yaga my mind goes to the Russian guy from Antman and the Wasp freaking out over her.

Ok this creature is the only one in 40 years of various fantasy games that actually scared me to go against. And referencing the movie Labyrinth with David Bowie was priceless, very good, very good. Thank you for continuing to let us share your world with you.

I'm a little disappointed that Mike didn't screw Baba Yaga...

Just kidding, I love your story! I'll write a bigger comment when I'll have read the last published chapter. Thank you so much!

Love magical characters and your incredible descriptions of sexy play with reference to losing Puritan attitude toward polyamory

Thank you for not letting Mike shag Baba. That would have been a bit much.

I just want to say I have read every one in the home for horny Monsters series. I must say I have been on the edge of my seat. Very captivating story. Hope you continue. Certainly had had my mind and hand racing in unison on the regular. CreYfm

I have so much love for your story! It's by far the best erotica I've ever read!

Absolutely my favorite chapter thus far. I was expecting his most terrifying place and time for Baba Yaga to use against him to be his home with Baba Yaga taking the form of his mother, but was pleasantly surprised at how you worked the school into it instead. Very very nice keep up the great work, we all love it.

I didn’t know what was missing from my fantasies until Ratu got into it, or rather Mike got into Ratu. Straight to my favorites!

This has been my absolute favorite chapter! Ratu might even replace Cecilia as sexiest girl in my eyes! I will be getting off many times to the thought of her! Wonderful writing here!

Lamia are another breed of Snake woman.

This would make a great (and naughty) full length book. :)

This story is absolutely amazing. I’ve been hooked since chapter 1. I’m so eager to get to the next chapter. Your writing skills are impeccable. The way you bring these characters into life is amazing. Loving the new snake girl. Please keep it up. I’ll keep reading it. You should definitely publish this. I’ll buy the book in a heart beat. Thanks so much!

I wish that I’d given you 4 -star ratings heretofore, in order that this installment’s 5 stars would mean more.

If you were to reduce the sex by 80% (I know— blasphemy!), your book would be easily picked up by a publisher, and we’d have to pay you to read it!

Holy fuckballs Ratu is SEXY!!! New fav!

Yes Ratu is definitely my favorite...5 stars

Definitely a new version of, “how to win friends and influence monster’s and demons”. Well done! Finn

Wow, I didn't think a guy having sex with a snake girl would be this enticing.

Very hot scene with the naga and I love the joke about knowing each other since they were kids

This chapter was everything! I love how creative you are with references and action. I can see everything in vivid detail and the plot just keeps getting better and better. Tis is the best story of any genre I've read in a very long time! Can't put it down!

Amazing story, love it!

omg!

words fail me.

its beyond brilliant and very captivating.

Thank you again for your hard work! I can't exactly confirm how accurate your research was, but I appreciate that you went to the trouble of making the characters/setting more tied to real world mythology. Really ties that whole semi-fantasy feeling (not too sure what it's called) into the story.

Honestly this story has been better than most fiction I have read in quite a while.

Just found your worked and been reading it non stop, I really love your story telling and characters ! I also love the research that went through this !

This chapter is probably my favorite so far, I like snake girls, can't wait to read more about this Naga. Cecilia's gift will probably be really useful, I'm impressed by the way this story turned out ! Can't wait to read what comes next, have a wonderful day !

this has been the best story ive read in a long time , cant wait to continue reading it . very well done