All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 030'

I haven’t commented in the previous chapters because I see that some of the comments are what I would have said. His time is no different. The comment by NovaM and the anonymous commenter echo what has been in my head since I started reading. I am not reading this as a sex/romance story, but it does make the story flow and build. The bond of all of the characters would not make sense with out it.

I am also immensely thrilled that this story is still being written. Because of this story, i have discovered that I am like my namesake character and his new roommate. I am certain that I have a monster fetish and have read a couple other stories that the author stopped writing and I was left with a sense of disappointment. Annabelle, thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us!

Annabelle, you write your story in CinemaScope. 🎥 I can see every scene in my mind’s eye.

Gifted, you are 🧝🏼‍♀️

Merci beaucoup, my lady 🤩😍

I am reading a sex story and the sex is the least interesting part.

I am fascinated by the humor (gentle giggling humor), fun and friendly and loving.

The story is expert, just the right draw forward, just the right pace. Grammar, sentence structure, pace are beautiful. These are things that can bother me when not right and this writing is perfection.

I can't put this story down (hfhm), like the best of fine fiction. It can keep me up to the early hours of the night in spite of my need to sleep.

THANK YOU writerannabelle for this story. When I finish it I will have to consume everything else. Sleep is overrated.

That was a pretty interesting story. I wonder what would happen next.

Thanks so much for 30 chapters, my binge read continues!

This story is getting thin. The author must be getting desperate to fill up pages. Murderous house? Really?

Love it! Thank you!

Even with all sexy stuff, this is good enough to publish publicly. I love a good stoey, and this one really gets and holds your interest. I can't wait to see what's next!

i have only started reading this series a few days ago and love. I find myself forgetting my troubles and being lost in the story. I love it thank you.

Cecilia didn’t even do anything magical, she just sang Danny Boy or one of the many, many mournful Celtic songs and the poltergeists naturally passed on from sheer sorrow.

Jokes aside, the banshee helping the spirits to move on inspired me to listen to a few Celtic songs and I’ve teared up. Those Irish sure know how to make mourning sound beautiful.

Excellent chapter.

I'm wondering how Dana and her companion are doing on their motorbike trip? It's been a few chapters since they hit the road.

Loving this story! Literally can’t wait for the next segment or chapter! Thanks so much for sharing!

I'm loving every minute of this story but so far this part is my favorite. The part about Cecelia's song was amazing. I have tears streaming down my face. In 24 days it will be the 1 year mark of the death of the love of my life and reading that part just flooded me with emotion. It was beautiful. Thank you💚

With a POed Jenny doll, and an irate Caretaker, the rats are dead rodents walking. The bloodbath should be amazing.

I knew that pissing off Jenny was a bad idea.

Possessed doll FTW.

You ask for fair rating, I say ten stars, though I can only click five. Another excellent chapter in a mesmerizing tale. Loved Mike's electric fuck, and Cecelia's dirge just about brought tears to my eyes. Such an amazing tale. Bravo Bravo!

So, the magic was putting another notch on his bedpost?!

Took me a while to find that pun! :-)

Brilliant!

Super cool! I liked how Mike is now more aggressive and I thought his solution to deal with the evil spirits was ingenious. Excellent!

Many authors on this and other sites appear to have difficulty with the characters and their situations within the story, you appear to have conquered this problem and relish the opportunity to astound your readers. This work appears to be taking on a format similar to "The Game Of Thrones" saga that has recently graced our television screens here in the UK.

I love tha banshe chasing spirits part

I love how you've made this a story, and not just a sex scene. I know I coming to the table late, this work is magnificent. Thank you for making the home bright with characters, and seeming to burst with energy. I'm quite enthralled with the beauty of the story, and the sex helps.

They have pissed off Nice Guy Mike--they are dead. Great chapter.

Please keep writing. You are talented!

Brilliant!

So so well written! Came here for the erotica and stayed for the story! Can't thank you enough for this. On to the next chapter now. Also have you thought of teaming up with an artist and giving us sketches of each of your characters?

Been wanting to read this for ages so downloaded first 20 for holiday reading. Got so engrossed I had to acquire next 20 to see me through. Brilliantly conceived and totally mad but I love it.

5⛤throughout. Now I have to go back and comment on the earlier instalments.

I love it so much that I hate for a chapter to end.

Wow.

The chaotic energy of this chapter is everything I love about the author.

Covers a wide range of emotional highs and lows, and sets up major events in this book, and beyond...

As per the usual this re read is going and your writing is brilliant

Can't wait for the be chapter

Can't wait for the movie.

Loving the novel so far, I feel like part of the story, u have an amazing gift for writing, can't wait to read the rest.

I have read this up to chapter 30 and have to say this should be made into a book you have created a world as masterfully as the likes of Dean Koontz or Steven King I really can't wait to see where this goes

So many emotions stirred in this chapter. Holding so many characters together can not be easy and yet you do, each developing in their own way and with each other. It's playing like a movie in my mind including some fantastic sex no matter who is involved.

Another great chapter

The way you describe how each character acts and feels is so realistic i can easily picture it in my head as i read

Can't wait to keep reading and see what's in store

The story is still weird but good. I cried when you described the Banshee's song. As for your use "poltergeists" I think most would agree that legend describes them as malevolent pests.

Still a good read and I wonder if Beth and Mike will get together sexually? I hope so!

Your writing has improved immensely this book, I liked book 2 but it had so much going on during the action parts that I felt really lost. But now the action is really well written and paced much better this time around. I definitely appreciate the focus being mostly Michael this time around as apposed to almost 3 characters point of views bouncing around like it was in book 2. Alot of the problems I had with book 2 have been handled in this one so far which is great news. Also don't listen to some of these dumb comments I think having gay characters stay gay is a really good thing and is very rare in these kinds of stories. Keep up the great work

Hi Annabelle,

What a great story.

I love your choice of setup (how you introduce new characters), the build up and references to commonly known myths. In my opinion the sex part is serving the story as a part to lighten the mood. It is to some extent an active part (slowly building Mike's strength) but for me it is more to lighten the story between events.

Thanks,

Marc

truly wonderful, words fail me

I was wondering what his threshold was!!@

Love to see this turned into an Adult Anime just to see the characters. Great descriptions would need a great voice over so nothing gets missed by the audience.

Still loving the story, Mike’s not the only One tired of those damn rats. Jelly time

I've never been much for stories like these (even the non-sexy kind) but somehow, you've written something that really makes me come back for more.

Will definitely be looking at your website.

Whew! I’m a novice, as it relates to to magic and non-human entities, but friends, family and strong personas are motivators. Such a good storyline, as it evokes strong emotions. Thank you for such a good read. Finn

Jesus, this story keeps getting better and better. The funeral part was breathtaking, and so vivid.

Ive been reading this story from the first chapter of book 1 and it has given me so much joy. Thank you for creating such an immersive world.

Just recently found your stories, and I'm loving them. This one has my favorite of the cuff quip from Mike so far. "Sorry Chip" as he smashes the tea cup. Beautiful reference to Beauty and the Beast. Keep up your fantastic writing.

This series is awesome!

Best story I have ever read on Literotica thank you

Matthew Mordi

That funeral dirge and the description of the lake and not going into the light still has me in tears. You really described it beautifully and that comes from someone who believes in nothing.

Thirteen Ghosts. Got it.

Fucking chills. *thumbs up*

Totally LOVE this story. Fantastic writing. Roller coaster all the way!

I found your description of the funeral dirge beautiful having just lost a loved one...it helped thanks Annabell 💜

This is really a terrific series! I really think Beth needs love with sex, and I think Mike can do that for her.

I keep expecting an object in the Vault to be the "weapon of choice" when confronting an enemy, I'm kind of happy to see you aren't going that way. Warehouse 13 became boring because that was habitual.

I have a pretty good idea where this is going to go, but I am still riveted to the story. I have read 30 chapters in 3 days. I am home sick right now and this has helped me get through the hours of laying in bed. Thanks for the great imagery and story line. I hope your new year is good.

So much mystery, suspense & intrigue one forgets they're here for the sex XD

The dirge scene with Cecilia was quite beautiful to read. This is my second time going through this series and this chapter was the first time I bothered looking up the translations to Cecilia's expressions. After seeing the significance, I now feel obliged to go and look at all of Mike's interactions with her from the beginning in chapter 2 and look up the meaning of any Irish phrases she uses.

This being my second time through, I've also picked up on a lot of foreshadowing and self-references that aren't particularly obvious. There are a times when you read a story and a certain detail screams at you to pay attention because this is going to become really important later. A lot of your self-referencing is great from a continuity and world building standpoint. I wouldn't call it Chekhov's Gun, simply because you mostly do it with unimportant details rather than important ones, but it's fun for the reader to see a random reference resurfacing sometime later.

I have written only 1 comment so far. But I have read ALL 30 chapters so far in the last day or so. I have given all 5 star ratings. I Love Tink... This is a great novel looking forward to more

Thank you for sharing

When the lamp punched Mike in the face with its glove I literally hollered! That was the funniest thing I've read in a minute. I"m laughing writing this now. It was too good.

I dread coming to the end, your story is awesome I can't stop reading but life keeps interfering. I love the written word and came for the filth but there are some authors on here that should be putting their stories to books and yours is among them 🥰🤓

Rate fairly, you said. Okay, I give this chapter 5 stars. Just like all the other chapters. That's as fair as I can be and I won't be dissuaded, so don't bother trying. LOL.

Well done. I hope Jenny tears those rats a new one. Thanks for posting.

Mike is one hell of a character. Did not want to be the hero he is. Annabelle your ability to make the drama feel so real in this fantasy world is magnificent hun. The characters all have a charm and a vulnerability. Not yet read the next one, but I think with Beth there now, with him, Mike will get the Rat King to understand. Do not mess with Jenny. When I first read about her I thought of 'Steven Kings IT' She is not that, but just as sinister when pissed off. Well done in making a monster that also has her tender side when she feels like her family is under threat and there to protect them. I am totally captivated by this wonderful and imaginative story. It should, with maybe some minor adult changes, make a Netflix saga. I do so hope it does.

gotta give you credit, this is a seriously GOOD tale. i really like the teaser at the end of each chapter.

I love😍 this story line so much that I stay up till 2 and 3 am reading it😔. Due to Covid 19😷 I'm off work until May 1st so Im not too broken up😩 by losing sleep. One of the best reads ever....and I read A LOT!!

Great again. Constantly amazed by your ability to bring these amazing characters together in new ways, working through doubt and trust issues, and making the sex both hot and deeply spiritual. 💓🦄🌈

So friking awesome, absolutely love your story and style of writing:-D The scenes first with beautiful Cecilia and the funeral dirge, and then the fiery exchange between Mike and mr Ratty, was just beautifully composed. Absolutely loves the universe you here have created, and are completely engrossed in each of the fantastically well fleshed out characters. Hope you are doing well, and looking forward to reading the rest of the story :-D :-D

Not sure how he will react when he realizes the Naia just took over without asking when he was with Sal, also the jealousy issue he had seems to have been ignored. Nadia may just be taking over, turning a bit malevolent, hope not. But we will see, after all in most mythos humans are just playthings to driads and nymphs.

Like so many of those in this series, it was truly enjoyable, but this one with the Banshee taking away the spirits was fantastic. She deserves a massive reward for that.

Thanks for all the good ones so far.

(chanting at the end of the chapter)

SEX WITH RATS

SEX WITH RATS

I've been slowly reading this work for the last few weeks and it's really well done! There's occasionally sex I'm not super into, but the overall story and a lot of the sex scenes are very hot.

The one thing I wish there was more of was some more gender and sexuality diversity - gay and queer folks who aren't ladies. Still, this is rad, thanks for writing it and I'm definitely hooked!

Surprisingly since the start of the story my main interest has been Beth in a story about monster girls. Now my sole interest in all this is seeing her and mike get together.

Annabelle,

I have followed you from the beginning and i can not even begin to explain the edge on my seat feeling you give me when reading your AMAZING story. I saw one comment about mike and beth having a go at eachother? Is that comming? The two are truely the match with both having another spirit type attached to their soul . What would happen to them if they were to have sex? I cant wait. I am just going tok sit back and enjoy this roller coaster youve got. Im pretty sure now that whatever direction your going. Im going to love it.

Keep writing, were all looking with eager anticipation.

Just believe in your ability. You are so talented!

Love this series!! Hope it goes for a long, long time!! The descriptions of your wild species/magical/mystical sexual episodes are exhilarating. Would love to see a lot more anal, especially like what Lily did to Mike with her tail, that was super hot. Maybe Beth can get dp'd from either Mike and a huge dicked monster or two monsters, some bi action with Mike and a huge cock would be super hat as well. Maybe a load in his ass would be magical too. Love the characters, the story is intelligent, fun and a keeps me wanting more. Thanks for sharing your immense talent!

Oh yeah I'm hooked alright. You got me coming back and checking this everyday. So keep em coming haha

can't you make beth fuck mike without jenny in her. I can't wait anymore. You make her have feelings for him now its time to put a show!!!! Another thing, can't you make a movie out of it,it really going for the oscars.

I have been reading them since you started publishing them and it is getting hard to remember details of everyone. If you can't write something in to remind us, can you maybe point to the correct chapter to reread in your preludes?

I was not keen on the rat king when this part started, but the plot has grown on me. I look forward to seeing Mike pissed off!

I like Mike's vulnerability. Too many stories in this genre have some kind of unbeatable warrior-father-figure as their protagonist. It's a kind of wish fulfillment, I guess. Mike can make ineffective plans, regroup to make better plans, and take a plate to the face like it's actually a problem. He's refreshingly human.

I wish the chapters were longer!

Love HFHM please keep it coming looking forward to chat 31

I love the story, I'm glad mike isn't another rambo character can't wait for the next chapter keepum coming

PLEASE print this, I would love to buy it! ♡

Good tale as always!

I am absolutely in love with this series and find myself constantly checking if you’ve written a new chapter even though you could not possibly have had enough time to do so!! I really do wish this story never ends, there are endless possibilities to explore with mike and the girls, (maybe even a male one day? ;)) I love your work and I really hope you never stop creating!

Ps. Would love to see a futanari in one of these chapters some day! Xx

Possibly one of your best sequences. How haunting scary and beautiful that section was. The description was perfect.

Cant wait to see what happens next. It will be good to see Mike kick it up a gear.

This will be my first comment I’ve ever written in over 5 Years of visiting Literotica.

I want to see this story in print.

I want “Hard” Copy ;) - series- on my bookshelf.

I cannot fathom a higher compliment, although I wish I could.

This is a story I never want to end.

Thanks for writing this, can't wait to read more...

Thank you again for sharing this beautiful story with us.

Hopefully Mike can control the powers he is growing into, better than Emily did.

I love this story! I love paranormal romance and erotica and it's not often you find stories that have both great sex and great substance. You've created a wonderfully imaginative story with intriguing characters. I can't get enough. I will say that this story reminds me of a cartoon that used to be on Cartoon Network. Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends? Just a tiny bit though. In a giant house full of of creatures and secrets sort of way. This is like the super awesome, lore rich, clever, sexy, super adult, better in every way 2nd cousin twice removed. 😂 I mean this comparison in the absolute best way. Love your story! Literally can't say enough good things. Can't wait for your next update.

I hope Cecelia's not gone too long! She's my favorite, and that section was far too beautifully written for her to not come back.

Like clockwork, reliably, every two weeks you seem to pop out a masterpiece. The characters are becoming more complex and somewhat realistic and Mike is coming into his own - uber-sentient? His red eyes indicate he is somewhat possessed.

Keep it up! Great job!

Just spend the last 4 hours reading the entire series thus far. I love it! Such an amazing and sexy world you've created that kept me clicking hungry for the next chapter. Love the intimate and rough scenes you paint, as a long term fan of "monster girls" you've hit the nail on the head for me. Especially love the detail of anatomy you give for each of them. I keep getting excited waiting for more of these scenes and hoping that "this" time will be a similar repeat of tinks back door action, not yet but I know it'll happen eventually and I can't wait for it! Definitely partial to Ratu and hope mike gets to expierence more of this mysterious and powerful deity. Definitely hope there's more monster ladies to be discovered, not asking for you to change your story I love every twist and turn you've created and only dream of a spider girl gracing the home soon. Eagerly waiting the next chapter and the defeat of the Rat King! Save jenny!

What will be the effect of pumping so much Sexual Magic into Zel? Will she become a Were-Centaur, able to shift from Horse-Aspect to Huma-Form (and any point in between) at will? I really would like a sex scene where Mike fucks Zel in Centaur form! I don’t think that would be Bestiality. She’s a Monster! I’m also looking forward to Mike fucking Sophia. I think her one eye and size is way sexy. And a threesome with Beth and her Demon would be great. What would happen to Beth and the Demon if Mike pour some of his sexual magic into both of them during a threesome? Mike enjoys anal. Could Mike be as bisexual as Beth and Naia? He’s certainly open to new experiences.

The Magic Sex with Zel was hot, weird and well written. Thank you.

I'm amazed on how you created this world and I always look forward to the new adventure they will run into. ❤ Thank you!

First, are you going to publish book 2? I really want these for posterity, and would prefer it if you would publish them.

Second...WOW! This chapter really hits. As you alluded to, Mike is starting to come into his own. After being kicked around by many people, he is finally getting irritated.

Love the mentions of his father, and his actions with Zel. He appears to be finally starting to take charge.

The section with Cecilia is brilliant. I really enjoyed the imagery, and it gives her reason for being much greater meaning. Thank you.

Fantastic job. Please keep writing, and publishing.

I unrealistically, check for a new chapter everyday! I love your writing.

keep going I love this I'm

glad your back.

This whole story, all 30 chapters so far is amazing... Please never stop! I love everything and I check your Twitter all the time for updates

I just wanted to note that I really liked that alliteration you kicked this chapter off with, can't wait to find out what Mike is planning with that magic he charged with Zell, I really liked that part, I liked it all but that part kept suspense throughout the entire event. I kept thinking he was going to lick or poke at her back door with the refferenses to her tail and him being behind and under her so that was maybe just me getting distracted but it was really good

Your stories are the most interesting and entertaining I’ve ever read. It’s not sex with filler, it’s an awesome story with the bonus of sex. I’m very happy to see Mike gaining some kind of power that he can use to possibly protect himself. What bothers me, is that Mike is still mortal, and will someday die, and this whole cycle will continue. Still, best story ever.

Thanks so much for writing such an entertaining series. Great and different characters.

I absolutely love this story, it is by far my favorite to read on here, the characters are all so interesting and I love how they all interact! Keep up the great work!