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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

First! Ha! Amazing as always

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thank you. (And I guessed correctly - Krampus!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pity you can’t write as fast as I want to read them 😅

uneedabrain2uneedabrain2about 2 years ago

Another great read. I hope this story goes on for several more years because It's going to be very hard to find another tale as entertaining as this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not sure the fudging helped - it breaks the Character we all know and seems unnatural taking us out of your world into the crappy real world we live in. Everything else is tip top up the scratch as usual

CortavarCortavarabout 2 years ago

Hi Anabelle and everyone!

Great chapter as always!

I loved that Mike has grown through the course of the story and is now sufficiently at peace with himself to be able to tell the ghost of Christmas past to fudge off!

I also enjoy Death, Lilly and Cerberus' antics on the sleigh! Lilly is the perfect straight man (not something often said of a succubus, but here we are) to Death's enthusiasm, and Cerberus with antlers pulling Santa's sleigh is a great move! Will Cerberus' chains stay broken? She's a good girl, she deserves to be able to walk out from time to time!

As for the next chapter, we've got vents, we've got Christmas, and a battered up hero... Is Mike going to John McLane his way through the vents and yell Yeepee Kay Yay Motherfudger? Can he throw Krampus from the top of the furnace, Hans Gruber style?

Best regards,

Cortavar

MCRidersClubMCRidersClubabout 2 years ago

Another amazing chapter in one of the best compilations I've read in a long time. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Luv luv luv luv luv!!!!!

dwoelfledwoelfleabout 2 years ago

You bring joy and a smile with almost every installment. Love thos series. Thank you.

joshmosejoshmoseabout 2 years ago

Fun times. Did Kris Kringle steal something from Krampus, or just replace him? This could be fun. And Lilly as a Christmas Elf, good times.

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 2 years ago

I am looking forward to seeing how this unfolds. I don’t know anything about the traditions of the Krampus so it will all be new to me.

One of the delights of the past few decades is reading how some of my favorite authors have turned Death into such interesting, wonderful characters. Your version of Death joins the versions from Pratchett and Gaiman as outstanding characters. I don’t have the words to give higher praise. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us.

BlowPopJBlowPopJabout 2 years ago

I had a feeling Krampus was involved! Loved this chapter

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 2 years ago

Lily and Death delivering Christmas presents is hilarious. That and all speech becoming G rated even if not all actions were. Another great chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really love this series, read all the chapters a couple of times. It’s fun to see the Icelandic references to Grýla and Jólakötturinn og tröllin í fjöllunum.

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a heart warming and lilli and death it's a blast.tb

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 2 years ago

Another amazing chapter!!!!

I've heard of Krampus, but only in passing. I took a few moments after reading this to look it up. I love the idea and can't wait to read your take on this character. I also love the holiday cussing... Literally laughed out loud at a few of them. Though I'm still waiting for the inevitable Fudge, fudity, fudge, fudge, fudge.... LMAO

Thank you Annabelle for your time and effort, you truly have become one of my favorites, and I always wait with baited breath between each chapter.

Also want to thank you for the free E-books through wetleaf, give me something to read while I await the next chapter. Tink is still my favorite and I hope to see her soon.

nedthebundlernedthebundlerabout 2 years ago

Thank you for another installment.

I really like Death as a character, and his interaction with Lilly and the Hell-hound in delivering Christmas is a great addition to the story line.

I'm looking forward to the encounter with Krampus and the safe return of Santa Claus.

FbjsFbjsabout 2 years ago

Happy to see Cerebus gets rewarded for being such good girls <3

mharrisonmharrisonabout 2 years ago

Amazing as always !!! Loved it.....

I keep on saying it but I can't say it enough.... Thank you so much for sharing your work with us all....

Got to be one of, if not the top author here!!!

Z_retgfZ_retgfabout 2 years ago

Thank you for sharing these amazing stories with us, you are one of my favourite authors.

skippersdadskippersdadabout 2 years ago

Another fudging great chapter,I have been reading all yopur stories and love them all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hell YESSSSSS let's go Krampus!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have been a voracious reader of fantasy and science fiction all my life.

I still miss Roger Zelazny's creative and unanticipated plots and story lines. I named my first home the "Amber Acre" to honor the Nine Princes series.

Radley's Home for Horny Monsters is top rank writing, and the volume of work is simply incredible. Stephen King and Robert Jordan class of production.

And you mix delicious sex with engaging fantasy.

Engaging eroticism.

You are my favorite new author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just to say, Lily and Death delivering presents is comedy gold. But now that you showed that glimpse into Yuki's past, you know we will be starving for more. Just one request, I would love to have a comment from the peace of Mike soul in Lily, about what she's doing and wearing. 😂

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wish I could give you 50 stars. ABSOLUTELY LOOOOVE this story!!!

ForgottenOne005ForgottenOne005about 2 years ago

Loving this book the family friendly filter on people and their reactions (especially Lily) are gold

I know very little of Krampus so looking forward to the way they are presented and quite curious if the ghost of future brings in Mikes spider daughter to attack him in his uncertainty of fatherhood

Speaking of which has a name for her been decided? If not maybe one of us readers could suggest some possible names and you pick one you like the best

Well its just a thought anyway but like always stay safe out there and keep up the amazing work

BenByTheWayBenByTheWayabout 2 years ago

The spirit was allowed inside the house in Yuki's memory so it doesn't make sense that the Gaes was protecting Mike. I agree that the content filter was pretty funny.

christi11christi11about 2 years ago

Well done, thanks for sharing! And yeah, not being able to cuss is a crackup! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I can't get enough of your writing. I can't wait for an interaction with no naughty words should be hilarious and hopefully still hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Krampus

Called it!

EsbanosEsbanosabout 2 years ago

Sorry, but i hated this chapter

rayironyrayironyabout 2 years ago
Thank you again

Our own Crusty Annabelle...!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Better not cry out, better not try, because Krampus is coming, and then see who is next to die!

FlyingGuy1958FlyingGuy1958about 2 years ago

No you're the amazing one. Thank your for all you've written and all that you will write in the future.

TwoGunKidtgkTwoGunKidtgkabout 2 years ago

Holy heck, that was fudging great!🎄

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I fucking called it

HELL YEAH KRAMPUS

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.wait is krampus going to be female?!?

MuffinMan13MuffinMan13about 2 years ago

Death and a filtered Lily are quite frankly hilarious together. Brilliant combination. Death's child like logic works so well in this chapter. I can't wait to see him pull it out of the fire to save the day.

Here's hoping?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

@esbanos - The actual fuck is your problem asshole? You say you hate it but can't even say why you hate it? You are the shittiest little troll i have seen so far in Annabelle's comment section.

Go shove that "sorry" up your fat ass and choke on a dick.

ContrahentContrahentabout 2 years ago

Throughout this whole arc, I've had the Lacuna Coil song "Naughty Christmas" in my head.

Krampusnacht!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You HAVEN'T read The Hogfather?!

Is a very good read, I hope you enjoy it. And now it is going to be very interesting to watch Death's journey through Christmas Night.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
Still good!

Mike's interaction with Christmas Past was a bit confusing, but WOW! BTW I've never heard of "The Hogfather" until it appeared during this story ARC. Also I had to look up "Krampus" just to figure out what it was! As always this chapter was a good read by an exceptional writer. You might not be Terry Pratchett, but you don't need to worry! In my opinion you're AWESOME! Please don't stop writing and don't take negative comments too seriously, after all it's your story so you should tell it the way you want. I couldn't stop laughing when the characters language 'cleaned up' and can only imagine how Tink will sound when get around to her. STAY AWESOME!

GiantPeach06GiantPeach06about 2 years ago

Wonderful! You are so talented and creative. Love, Love, Love

ArcTalyxArcTalyxabout 2 years ago

Oh, I’m dieing from laughter here. From the intro for new readers to the hell born Christmas delivery service, with a special nod to Lily with a filter, (will she survive with her sanity?), to Mike fucking his way out of trouble again. All around a great chapter that kept me in stitches. Definitely looking forward to seeing how the crew handles the Krampus.

DruggoDruggoabout 2 years ago

Excellent work.

Love the creativity, love the death scenes and interactions. For death to be having fun remind s me of death from bill and teds.

The swear filter had me dying. Well done

Ravus_SapiensRavus_Sapiensabout 2 years ago

HA! Called it! The Krampus is the big baddie.

Also: HOLY SHIT! The Beast of the Sea...! Good thing Lily had enough sense to flee; in Revelation 19-20, the combined force of the entire Heavenly Host doesn't have the power to kill it, only banish it. A single demon (even one who is developing a soul) and a lone Horseman wouldn't stand a chance. It would simply annihilate both of them, which does beg the question, what would happen if Death died? (except the rise of the Old Ones, according to Al Hazred)

Also, also: if I remember my Greek, the name for someone whose kink is confusion, would be a synchyfiliac (from Greek, "lover of confusion").

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMikeabout 2 years ago

Thanks for writing and to continue the fun journey

alp2vaalp2vaabout 2 years ago

This book has officially become the weirdest thing I've ever read. And I kinda dig it. As usual, can't wait to see more!

Katainja23Katainja23about 2 years ago

I'm enjoying the lighter tone of this story! Love getting a glimpse into Yuki's past, and Death and Lily are hands down my favourite odd couple! We need a spin-off with them pronto!!

Lenny20Lenny20about 2 years ago
Past is always the best

Since the beginning with Chapter 1, I always find the scenes where the past is the focus the most interesting. I really love the characters, especially Yuki since Mike saving her life, and I'm very glad to finally got to see some of her past. It was much darker and egoistical than I thought, though I wish we could have seen the memories that weren't that bad as well.

Also, I'm kind of digging the fact that Lily has now a cencorship-hat. I hope it stays on for a while, because it's just hilarious! And she and Death make a great duo, I hope we see more of just the two before someone else eventually joins.

As someone from Austria, where Krampus originated, I'm curious how that ghastly fucker will be portrayed in the next couple of chapters. Can't wait to read some more.

Five stars, for cencored Lily alone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your story tags are informative and hilarious.

I've only heard of Krampus, mainly because of the movie by the same name. When it was clear that there was a big bad behind the pear-shaped Christmas the only thought I had was "Could be Krampus." Yay! One of my predictions was right! I'm now one for every-other-prediction-I've-made about where your stories are headed. Yes, it's a soft snowball win but I'll take it. :)

HoubovyJazykHoubovyJazykalmost 2 years ago

It was nice to see you confirm something I had suspected of Mike’s mom. Ive wondered for a long time because I’ve seen bits of mike’s mom and his relationship with her in both my professional and personal life. I’ve seen what could have happened if she had never died and it wouldn’t have been awful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love the details of Yuki's past. Thank you for fleshing out her character some more. And I love it when Lily has to do good, grudgingly. You're excellent at comedy and this book is a good opportunity to let that shine.

t6greent6greenalmost 2 years ago

It was kind of nice to learn a little more about Mike’s past. Poor Yukon! Another Fantastic chapter. Thank you!

Redneck_390Redneck_390almost 2 years ago

The main story is awesome, but the bits with Lilly, Death, and Cerby are just hilariously entertaining!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This book reminds me of Futurama's Xmas. Bring it on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If there's not fan art of Death and Lily riding a Cerberus pulled sleigh with the caption "Worst Christmas Special Ever" then the internet has failed us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Agreed with the comments below, I need a picture of Death and Lily in the sleigh with Cerberus pulling lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Called that from the beginning of the book. More surprised that Mike doesn't know about krampus

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Using "they/them" for individuals like Pestilence and the ghost of Christmas past makes the story worse than if you used correct language. It just adds unnecessary confusion.

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

So has Santa upset the Krampus and why? Love your imagination and bringing all these mythical characters to life. Lily is one of my favourites, sorry that she has a hangup about him not being able to give him what she thinks he wants. She needs to get it off her chest and find out that that's not what he wants from her. Love the filter.

Brilliant.

_Jade__Jade_about 1 year ago

Thoroughly enjoying the books in this series. Kudos on a story well written and equally enjoyable. 👏🏻

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
Unreal!

Too much! Lilly and Death riding around in Santa's sleigh pulled by a hell hound? And what's up with them. (Death) wanting to deliver Christmas presents? Too funny! It seems that no matter what Mike finds a way to have sex with someone even a past memory!

I must admit that I never would've guessed you'd write something like this, but also can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next!

I'm not sure whether to commend or condemn you! Still please keep writing! I'm a sucker for the nonsensical! -- DeFox

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Unspected Christmas helpers and twisted spiritsbring us a lot of Mike's and Yuki's background togueder a lot ofbfun.

Thank you!

c4vetteman94c4vetteman9410 months ago

Santa Death and Elf Lily delivering presents in Santa's sleigh while being pulled by Cerberus with antlers and a red nose could be the greatest scene ever written on this site.

Procurator9Procurator910 months ago

We're definitely going Hogfather😏

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB10 months ago

Loving the nods to other Authors

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot7 months ago

Back to the rollicking, freewheeling romp of the earlier parts of this tale! All the 🌟s and many 👍 👍 up. I love it!

BarryAllen888BarryAllen8887 months ago

Love the parallels with a certain Tim Burton Halloween/Xmas stop-animation film!

CoucyCoucy6 months ago

"I have never felt more alive," Death declared.

4Logwald_Timberson4Logwald_Timberson6 months ago

I absolutely loved Death and Lily in the chapter! Death geeking phenomenal, and Lily being "subjected" to the Christmas cheer, hilarious! Absolutely well done!!!

Chromy2483Chromy24835 months ago

Oh god I laughed so hard when Lily discovered that she couldn't cuss and then discovered that she'd have to join Death who was having a great time, deliver presents! I wonder if after being forced to help doing a good deed with having to deliver presents she'll get something other than coal? This book has already been such a delight that I'm so looking forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

You missed the golden opportunity of the tag, “Ebeneezer Splooge”… 🤣

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