All Comments on 'Home for Spring Break Ch. 02'

by mtnman2003

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sbmcruisesbmcruise11 days ago

Disappointed he never too her ass, although she promised he could. Still a great steamy story.

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien4203 months ago

I liked it. Good read. Sounds like a great spring break.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
liked the story

wish there was a little more "story" - i like the slam bang sex, don't get me wrong - it was great - just like a little more character development!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 9 years ago

Good story but it needed a better ending. You kind of left it hanging there. Don't know if you meant to write a third chapter or not but since it's been over 7 years, I don't think another chapter is forthcoming.

GizmorGizmoralmost 14 years ago
Home

Great story. Thanks.

hammer17hammer17almost 17 years ago
Well now

Good story, I'm waiting for the husband to catch them in a hot sex session. Even if he allows it, them join in and get hot ass all the cock she can handle.

I hope he scares the shit out of them first, I just love it when the spouse does that. (It makes the sex better afterwards). I do hope you will incorporate that into the story sometime, BUT it is your story. Keep them coming...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I want to fuck her ass !

I'm too weak to write. Thank you .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WHEN

When you write about incest you have few equals,you could change the text format slightly,nothing else to say

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