by mtnman2003
Disappointed he never too her ass, although she promised he could. Still a great steamy story.
wish there was a little more "story" - i like the slam bang sex, don't get me wrong - it was great - just like a little more character development!
Good story but it needed a better ending. You kind of left it hanging there. Don't know if you meant to write a third chapter or not but since it's been over 7 years, I don't think another chapter is forthcoming.
Good story, I'm waiting for the husband to catch them in a hot sex session. Even if he allows it, them join in and get hot ass all the cock she can handle.
I hope he scares the shit out of them first, I just love it when the spouse does that. (It makes the sex better afterwards). I do hope you will incorporate that into the story sometime, BUT it is your story. Keep them coming...
When you write about incest you have few equals,you could change the text format slightly,nothing else to say