All Comments on 'Home For the Holidays'

reads more like a movie script than a story also to short. needs more background as to their relationship before this and more detail on the sex and their feelings about it while it happens. read some of the how to articles here and use one of the free editors to help out.

enjoyed it. well written. good dialogue.

very nicely written i enjoyed it :)

It's a great story for a short-short. Sure, I love a long story, more than most, but for a quickie, this was a great wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am.

The best ending is that her brother makes her pregnant to seal the love between the two of them

I'll rate this story higher when it is fleshed out. A good story line, just not enough to go on.

RS

Sweet sex with her brother and expecting some more loving the next night.

That's nice and so hot.

Thanks for the read.

It's short, but good. Very well written. Better than the others I've read.

Pretty enjoyably! Had me until the 'cum in me then suck it out' bit. Eww! Heh.