All Comments on 'Home For the Holidays'

Pretty enjoyably! Had me until the 'cum in me then suck it out' bit. Eww! Heh.

It's short, but good. Very well written. Better than the others I've read.

Sweet sex with her brother and expecting some more loving the next night.

That's nice and so hot.

Thanks for the read.

I'll rate this story higher when it is fleshed out. A good story line, just not enough to go on.

RS

The best ending is that her brother makes her pregnant to seal the love between the two of them

It's a great story for a short-short. Sure, I love a long story, more than most, but for a quickie, this was a great wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am.

very nicely written i enjoyed it :)

enjoyed it. well written. good dialogue.

reads more like a movie script than a story also to short. needs more background as to their relationship before this and more detail on the sex and their feelings about it while it happens. read some of the how to articles here and use one of the free editors to help out.