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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good start, why did you stop

I know you did not run out of words. Using a spellchecker will help. This is actually too short to show this story is worth a 5.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 4 years ago
butttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt:

really good really excellent . . . BUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT -

absolutely loathe how quickly it went the story

sirhugssirhugsabout 4 years ago
Good start

Perhaps in your next effort, you might add more dialogue, more detail and either an extended sex scene or more than one sex scene, This had the potential to be a "5".

Keep writing.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Quick and hot. Well done!

wallstreetguywallstreetguy8 months ago

Short and sweet. Very sexy.

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Not much to say, I enjoy writing erotic works! Tons of genres and different options.