All Comments on 'Home from School Ch. 02'

put it all together then send it in,

your not writing war and peace!

At the pace you're going there won't be any sex until Chapter 12. This is a porno site. You're not creating sexual tension or building up to something amazing. You're just wasting our time. ZERO stars!

My mother loved reading my Penthouse Forums. They eased her guilt of incestuous desires.

Don't listen to these other goobers. You are doing fine, and I am liking the build up. I am quite curious to see how far this goes.

Sure, I would enjoy longer submissions as well, but the writing is pretty good so keep it up and post at your own rate. Enjoying the build up so far.

When she realizes her son is looking at MILF porn, maybe even mom/son porn, does she feel a little twinge between her legs? Watch the porn and masturbate only to be recorded by her son's hidden cam?

You've written two parts so far, and nothing. Are you writing for Vanity Fair or Literotica?

I love the way this leads up. It doesn't always have to jump right in. I'm glad there are more parts, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Gee... could Lonely Mama be.... No... it couldn't be her... could it? These two are going to have a great time.

Thanks for sharing.

I really dislike series that are broken up into several quick 1 page or 3/4 page chapters. Just as you get get going jacking off, the chapter ends. Instead of a 6 chapter series, the author would be better off combining the first three chapters and the last three chapters and make it a 2 chapter series.