by sunburycd
Great story, I enjoyed every moment of this. I can't imagine what it would've been like if you did keep it as a short stroke story as you said it originally going to be. Thanks for expanding it to a much bigger story. 5-stars.
I'm always up for a good mother/son incest story, and this is a good one. I did wonder how she could spend money on a sexy costume and lingerie if they didn't have money for vitamins? After reading further I decided it was just a part of her ploy to get her son to fuck her.
Best author on this site i love your work. Keep it up your the best. My favorite for sure. Thank you so much.
Very nice. I especially like how you wrote the dialogue. It was hot while not be over the top ridiculous like some do it. I definitely prefer this style over the "Your mommy-slut needs your incestuous son seed in my mommy-cunt" garbage. 5/5 for this one, and I'm definitely going to check out more your work.
it made perfectly good sense to me! If i had been reading and stroking at my normal time i prolly would have climbed the peaks at least twice! My normal time is before the sun and any of my roommates wake up. My me time. As it is, i was interrupted right before that first hand job bore fruit (for he and i both!), and then again when they make the sign of the double-backed beast. What a drag, man. You so very well captured the son's awestruckedness and his overwhelming desire, quickly followed by HER overwhelming desire. Lovely lovely silly willy story. While the story is not lacking and is complete, my own interrupted prone session with it has me selfishly wanting more! Sir! More, please, sir! That's from "Oliver". Bloody good show, mate!
Outfuckingstanding, very erotic and sexy, a very well written and told story............():\
@redlion75 I hadn't even though of that! Interesting.
Anyway, thanks all for reading and the feedback.
Very well done looking forward to more from this story and looking forward to reading more from you specifically 5 stars
Fantastic, I know you intended this as a short and you nailed it, but I could definitely read this as a 10+ pager. Love the format and proposition, would love to read an extended one.
Very imaginative. You handled this fanciful idea so well, never too seriously. Great writing; thanks!
Loved it! Felt like the perfect length and the way they toyed with each other leading up to the finale was great. Five stars and favorited. Thanks for writing it.
Started off as ridiculous and turned into a hot story. Reminded me of my story about acne. I hope you read it. 5 stars.
Thanks for sharing this cute story- love the lighthearted banter and the interaction between mother and son. Even though one knows where it is headed it was joy to read and visualize
Venus
You should be proud of the work you have done on writing stories I have always wanted to write a book or a story about stuff and I can’t come up with anything so be proud of yourself and what you have accomplished
Five rating "eyes unashamedly ogling her perfect triangle of dark pubic hair." Again, a five rating!! sick of authors dumping razor burnt nonsense with chaffed skin and pimples. A great story and a great description of a woman!