All Comments on 'Home Repairs'

Please, please, please do a followup chapter with all three in the same bed while the dad breeds the daughter. Five stars and a favorite point!

More please 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

More please! Let us know what happens next

Don't Stop Now!!! Lol, Great story! Hung (pun intended) on every word! Wow, loved it!

I really enjoyed your story but it ended too soon! Please tell us what happens to Anna and her parents.

I love this story please post another chapter. Would love to see the mom make her little girl cum all over her face.

A great story line awaits as Mom sets up the formal breeding of daughter. A nice ceremony with all three and Mom holding her hand as she is fertilized. Then the excitement as the test kit shows positive, a doc visit confirms, a baby bump starts to show ... Lots of details!

Please tell us there will be more. And if so I would enjoy you picking up with mom suckling daughter's big tits and some mom and daughter action.

Lucky Daddy. I wonder does this happen in the real world .

Another story where Lit just doesn’t provide enough stars! I love your writing style and the was your pace the frustration and desire before your characters cross over the incest line. The compliant mom just made the take hotter. Another great job by you.

Thanks for your story, I was fucking my dildo reading this imaging it's my daddies cock 😘

Another case where Lit just doesn’t provide enough stars to appropriately reward a story. I love the pace of your stories and how you build up the frustration and tension between the characters before pushing them over the incest line. Well done again!

That was fucking HOT!

PART TWO part two part two!!!!!!!!!! We need the rest of this story!!!!!!! Hot 🔥 hot 🔥 hot 🔥!!!!!!

So honest. Masterful planning on mom's part. Beautiful progression of events that so many families desire but are afraid to act on.

That was fucking hot!!. Wish that would happen to me!

Why do y'all ruin a perfectly good story with pregnancy?

It was a five, now it's a three. Keep her on BC and have mom join in it's a twelve

another mountaindewman masterpiece great job. keep it up. will we see part 2?

A great story about the luckiest man in the world as mom/wife encourage daddy/daughter playtime. Love the slow seduction of the daughter and I agree with others a second chapter would be amazing with a family threesome mommy guiding her husbands cock into their daughters pussy and begging her husband to breed their daughter.

I mean, the way you wrote her. she's pretty much given up on average sized guys, the only one she really wants his her father, and she's going to have a daughter with him -- while seemingly also fucking her mother. Basically, you set it up that they will be a thruple, that she'll be a second wife to him. All that would need to finish it was a pseudo marriage ceremony.

ASAP 😊

What a story!! One of the best I have ever read. No crazy construction to get to her father, consistent with itself, a path that you can follow all the time. I hope there will be more parts!

You write women and a woman's POV entirely like a creepy guy thinks women would be like. It's pretty off-putting.

You write the stereotypical woman written by a guy. It's basically unreadable.

Loved it right up to the last paragraph. I don't judge but for me impregnation fantasy is one of the few that completely reverse any arousal I'm having reading story. I literally groaned out loud as my cock shrunk in disappointment. I just don't understand a fantasy that means life long reminder in the form of another human being, especially a baby, then toddler, then young one, etc. Totally don't get how someone would fantasize this. As I said I don't judge but this is one of the few categories that I can't get past.

... Of Borderline Illiteracy.

Juices poured out my pussy like Niagara Falls, soaking the bed; I didn't care.

My pussy burned with every stroke as he hammered me; I didn't care.

Your English Teacher said, ‘pay attention.’ You didn't care.

As always, great.

You build up well and I love the detail of the final coupling. Another chapter would be good to round it off, no pun intended.

I, absolutely loved this story!!! Keep them coming!!!

Liked the story but needed to go till after mom and daughter finnished.

I was so happy to read, "The insurance company and the contractor say the rest of the house is loveable". But, after an F3 tornado, I would have expected them to be happier if the house was still LIVABLE! That is just plain sloppy writing, and you are too good for that.

dezurtdawg

5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 Part 2?

Holy shit lmao. This is as good as my mama barbeque. Thanks a lot kind sir.

You get 4 stars for this story...because you DID NOT PAY ATTENTION TO YOUR ENGLISH TEACHER...as pointed out by another reader. This story was "revised/reviews" just this year...why were the errors not corrected then??

Pregnancy...?? It is a nice fantasy...we will see how the 'family unit' works around this desire...is it gonna be forced...non-consensual in any way...if it even seems so...I AM OUTTA HERE!!

Hotter than hell.

Well Done!!! 😶🥵🥵

Bill S.

I was wondering why a mother seemed so willing to encourage her daughter to have sex with the husband / father. A woman has to REALLY love her man to even consider such a thing.

Nicely done! 5*

36E??? bye

Okay, so I stumbled upon this one strictly by accident. I was reading a brother/sister incest story and after I finished it and commented, I saw the HOME REPAIRS link in the suggestions listed. The description led me to believe that it was a story about a family whose house is damaged and the siblings end up sharing a bed together. ❤ Obviously that wasn't the case. 🙄 Normally, the suggestions list doesn't mix different types of incest like that.

Personally, I don't like cross-generation incest at all. I find it terribly disturbing. 😕 But there's something entirely different about the way that you approached it here that made it palatable. I actually enjoyed this one. It had to be a combination of things and not any one single item. But I have to believe that the fact that Mom encouraged her daughter to help her keep her husband from cheating was the deciding factor.

In real life, my bisexual wife took a similar approach. She preferred heterosexual to lesbian sex and would tell you that without any hesitation whatsoever. But she also loved to smell and taste pussy. I've watched her go down on another girl and eat her for more than an hour without a break. So she decided that the best way to keep me faithful was to share her girlfriends with me. It worked out great because I never considered cheating on her. 😅 Why would I? I didn't have to go out looking for a different piece of ass when with a little patience, it would be delivered to me on a silver platter!

So I voted 5/5 for this story and noticing that there is a part 2 available, I'll read on a little further.

HOT, HOT, HOT 🔥🔥🔥

Congratulations on a great story.

Gross. Just gross.

Too coarsely written.

Bill S.

It was a bit on the fictional side but it was super hot. 5 stars

That was a wicked move the wife pulled on the husband, with no sex. lol

Okay, so normally cross generation incest is a huge turn off for me. I'm strictly into the brother/sister/first cousin stuff. One of my biggest issues with the daddy-daughter incest is the husband cheating on the wife by fucking their daughter. However, in your story Mom is the instigator pushing her husband and daughter together of her own free will. Consent isn't just implied, it's blatantly obvious. I'm okay with that. I only wish that you had worked that into your story closer to the beginning.

This was a lot of fun to read, but the other issue that bothered me was the old overused and worn out ten inch cock/ 38E sized breasts trope. You should be able to enflame the readers imagination using every day average build people for your characters instead of resorting to using freaks of nature. You lost a point for lack of originality. 4/5

Just wow !! I love it when a mother schemes to make daddy fuck their daughter…. And gets off on that !

And in this case the pregnancy works !!

Dang!!!

6 inches is around about average in America yet she talks like its small. It would be like a guy complaining about the average tits in America which is a C-cup.

My girl has C-cups and I'm dissapointed even D cup is barely above average its essentially a 6 inch for men. I need F cups and this story is hot with a bitch with big tits.