All Comments on 'Home Sweet Home Ch. 06'

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OlebillOlebillover 7 years ago
Bad

What crap of an ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wrong

After all they went thru and the fight that all siblings have to put up with this was one of the most shitty endings I have read. It was good from the beginning then the parents and then this.. You need mto study more about incest before writing anymore

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Watch out

a cliff hanger for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This was a good series that I liked reading, until the last couple paragraphs. This story needs another chapter, at least, to end it properly.

cabowabodudecabowabodudealmost 12 years ago
ohhh noo

like many other commentors, the story cannot end this way. they've so long of a way. please add another chapter. i know every story doesn't need to end happily, but this one really does.

reader018reader018almost 12 years ago
WHAT???

Don't you dare have them brake up their relationship after all they went through!!!! That will ruin the story,please put them back together!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I can guess...

I can guess where this is heading but would still like to know when the next chapter is going to come up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Don't let their love for each other end like this it would kill him in the end. Please write another chapter so we can find out what happens to them.

AerosAtarAerosAtaralmost 12 years ago
I rarely comment, but...

... this definitely needs more. This is an incredibly good story, even if I hate the way it currently is heading (with her seemingly giving up). I honestly think she does love him, and I want to see more of this story so I can be proven right. I've read stories that ended badly before because of the whole 'family-splitting-them-up' thing, and they always leave a bitter taste. Heh. What can I say, I'm a hopeless romantic that loves a happy ending and I want one for this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lolz...

I can tell she doesn't love him. She is just a horny bitch and will do whatever the fuck she can do to get a dick stuffed up her cunt. I bet that Derrick is going back for Daphne... Yup, that would make a good ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more please

It can't end like this what is she thinking breaking his heart like that, damn come on that's to much more please..

kaidmankaidmanalmost 12 years ago
dynamite

aw man this needs another chapter please I am begging you not to let it end like this please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yes Hopefully this isn't the end!!!!

I loved the series so far to and I am hoping this is not the end. For if it is, I will be sorely disappointed! This story can't end until Derrick puts Grant in the hospital for 6 miserable months or better in traction!! I also hope Courtney will finally do the right thing and stand up for herself to her father!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
next chapter...

he kills himself...

otherwise you just decided to be a troll with this ending, because through all the chapters, I can only conclude one thing: she doesnt truly love him, and she sure as hell isnt sorry

I can only hope for "a" next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hopefully Not The End!!

Loved the series so far but am hoping this is not the end, if it is, I will be sorely disappointed!! This story can't end until Grant has spent 6 miserable months in the hospital!!!

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