by tower1604
Interesting story. Hot too. I would certainly look forward to additional chapters.
Oh yes, more, more!! Very well written. He has a nice harem building, mum must be next???????
Your story reminded me of my wonderful second wife.
She loved sex and would open her legs for anyone.
I would love to read your follow up story.
It would be interesting if Mike fell in love with and married Kirsty.
Hell yeah it's worth writing part 2. What did Aunt Ruth mean by girl sex is ok? We need to know, so bring on part 2.
A tad confusing in transitioning. Arrived at mum’s home; sister walks out the your talking about L.A. coming back to bad hotel in London, then your in the Rover banging Jill your sis. Al in all a good story. I admit to getting distracted by the British writing. I’ve multitudes, or should I say copious? Still a good read
You should have started the story at the beginning instead of half way through. Weak having a hand job in the car with sister.
good begining of what we all hope is long story with many chapters.
definetly explain more the "Girl sex is ok" part. Sex with mother maybe as per her comments before shoping. Hope Kirsty will forget her pron career and stay with Mike.
good start with plenty opportunities to widen the story.
It would be extremely nice to include all the females into a massive orgy. Keep Kirsty! Paul G
looking forward to part 2,i wonder if he fucked his mom too,would be great if he did,sounds like an orgy is on the cards
Good story. Its been months buy i hope you will find time for further parts