All Comments on 'Home Visit Ch. 01'

You’ve opened up quite a few sexy possibilities here. Like the idea that He is God to her, and the notion of a husband at the end. Keep writing.

It’s an erotic first chapter, although I lost some respect for both of them though. His dropped with the 3 point commentary on anal sex because there’s absolutely no need for points 1 and 2. There’s no need to stint on prep just as there’s no need for it to hurt. To me that implies that he wants to hurt her and that her thoughts/ needs/ opinions are lesser. After all, gods are pointless when nobody believes in them.

I lost respect for her with the information about her husband, noting that he’s out of town implies that he’s unaware of her D/s relationship, although I could be reaching with that thought. That means she’s cheating on him, again there really isn’t a need for cheating, open relationship anyone?

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)