All Comments on 'Homecoming Queen Ch. 03'

I am loving this story SO much. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I think mom is going to love Allison too. After all, what mom doesn't want happiness for there child

incredibly written so far, i cant wait for the next part!

Started off great and keeps getting better.

Great Story line good writing loving the story so far

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Awesome story. Great writing. Please continue with this story. Every chapter continues to draw me in and I can’t get enough of it.

I have dressed and cum loads reading this wonderful series of stories. Can't wait for the sequel......

good story..lots of cum and lust

Great story. Please write another chapter

OMG - you MUST write another chapter. I'm in love with all these characters.

Awesome story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing this.

Awe, that's it??? Please?

Oh You Dirty Rat !

To build that suspence with Jasons mother shattering Allison's world only to leave me and all of your readers hanging !

I had been absored into the sexual heat of the two lovers.

My own pelvic area tigling with excitment.

You are a powerful writer !

I hunger for the next chapter.

More, please. This is good.

i would definitely be Allison ,but not ashamed of being a trans gurl

Good story hope there's more to it to come

It would amazing to offer a continuation of this story.

This story is AWESOME! Please give us a chapter 4.

Ending of the century! I loved it!

Please continue

What a wonderful story, but oh my gosh! What happens when Ally comes out? How does Jason handle the cat being out of the bag? What about when she tells her mom and finds out she's known since almost the beginning? How will she get her father to come around when he finds out, loses his cool, calls her Allen and he and rejects her? What are the consequences when Katy gets jealous, feels cheated and gets her revenge by plotting and outing Ally and Jason in the middleof "Allen's. senior year, or tricking Jason into cheating on Ally and making sure Ally catches him in the act or whatever? So many dangling threads! It's absolutely BEGGING for a conclusion! (and just to be clear, I am as well)

please, please write another chapter

I need closure, I'm totally rooting for the both of you.

I have loved this story and favorited every chapter.

Please continue as soon as you can.

Wow, what an amazing story!! Please give us a fourth chapter, or more!! We need closure!!

Please continue with the next chapter. You have written an amazing story and I would really enjoy knowing how Allison and Jason continues their lives. 🤗 😘

Please write another chapter or two. Great story!

10/5

10/5

Exactly how I like the stories. Please continue. Just amazing and sooo sexy..

Oh yes must know what happens next.

"Katy, I need more than just sex. I need sex with a straight guy who fucking sucks."

honestly.... I get you girl

im not really into boy/boy stuff but this was hot please do the next chapter

This is so good. Please let the story continue.

Oh, no! It looks like there is supposed to be a chapter 4 and maybe more, I hope you decide to continue the story!

Great, great series. Plausible enough, emotional and very very hot.

Hope you give us more of Allison one day, I know I'd read it instantly ;)

Amazing please continue.

Please continue this wonderful and sexy story 🤗 😘

OMG!!!!! Please don't leave us hanging!!!!!!! What happens next????? This story is too good to stop!!! More please, pretty, pretty please I beg you my stiffy meter has gone off the charts hook a girl up!!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍

Part 4 is coming soon, I promise. It is about 3/4s written. I'm just working out how to end this chapter, as I have not yet decided if there will be a part 5.

My plans are to complete another story that is about 9/10s done, and then come back to this one. Hopefully the time away helps me to finish quickly.

As always, thanks for reading. This is by far my favorite series, and I'd never leave Allison and Jason with that cliffhanger.

God this would have made 1 heck of a movie series. There and back again. Bit on a very serious note. Me and Allen n Allison would have been open from the start. It is not anyone's job to stay hidden and unhappy for the rest to be happy. I should know. I did that all my life. And like I told my family. Eat shit and die, it bothers me not if you choose to be or not to be apart of my life from this day forth. Whomever chooses to make their life with me, you will treat with upmost respect and politeness. Elsewise, don't call, write or text untill you can GENUINELY..... Now I need my partner to have life everlasting.

I have immensely enjoyed this series; I think its because of the believability you have given your characters -- both in their dialog and behavior! I mean, I was can picture Mrs. Torvino coolly asking Allison if they knew each other, probably having a suspicion or six... Anyway, keep up the good work! Looking forward to 4, 5...18, or as many as you can!

Great story! I really enjoyed the entire series and wish to read more in the future! Thanx so much for publishing!

I really loved this series, a great lovely story.

I love if there was a chapter 4 to see how there relationship grew and blossomed.

Holy molly what a ride, and that ending…WHAT! First off, this was so well written and the characters were so good. Katy was spectacular, and I think she might need her own post graduation domination story…maybe she finds another CD at college and becomes their Domme. I really did love Katy…was nice Allison found what seems like a life long friend. This is seriously a must read and it begs for a fourth chapter. 5 Stars!