All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 04 Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Playing Out Very Nicely

It is exciting to see MomG lusting for her son so strongly that she is constantly wet and dream's of Erik's babymaker doing it's work in her Mommy hole, yet his interests are elsewhere. There's Nick who wants to develop his mother's (MomJ) primary tastes away from women and redirect them toward himself, there are brothers, sisters, cousins, aunts, etc., aplenty....and then there's Zoey with the hots for her son, Kurt. There are a lot of possible seedings coming into being but these three mom-son couplings will be the ones to watch. I am very grateful that you got this story back running on the site again. This is a good read. AnHoa Rifleman

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
downward spiral

i loved this series at the start. it really started to go down the drains once brianna died. Im still not sure about this new branch, and i really think u left the first saga unfinished. so, these next series had better be encapturing, or you'll lose a fan!!

jdnunyerjdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthor

I'm sorry to hear that, Anon. I hope that you do find the new arc to be engaging.

For the record, I'm aware the the first story isn't finished. They are part of a whole. After I get all the pieces in place, I'm going to wrap all the stories up at the same time. I understand that some might think that it's a bad idea to make readers wait so long to see how it all plays out. That's fair enough. But please be aware that I'm not just going to leave those loose threads dangling forever.

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