All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 04 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Eric Grows Up

This story is starting to mature. It is good to see Eric gain his manhood, to finally stop trifling with his mother and to realize that a son's rightful place is between his mother's legs. He enjoyed marginalizing her for a long time, hurting and diminishing her just because he could and because it made him feel like a world class stud. That qualified him as a low life and it was good to see MamaG purge him of that particular character flaw. She conquered him "completely" in the end and now that he is in proper relationship with Mom, he can grow and develop as a man. I hope to see the other two mom-son couplings come to fruition soon, not just physically (which has already happened) but on an emotional plane as well. Thanks for a great read, this is very easily five star material. AnHoa Rifleman

jdnunyerjdnunyerabout 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Rifleman. That was what I was going for. Eric still has some growing up to do, but this was a big step for him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hank moody?

bit of a califiornication fan are we?

its also funny how everyone breaks the "its just sex rule"

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

I've never seen Californication. Had to look it up when you said that. Fwiw, Hank's last name isn't Moody. It's Fisher.

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