All Comments on 'Homeless Girl'

... though how come ten guys living together? Students sharing a house?

Seriously stupid. Pure monkey Fucking. Not very good either.

Not worth rating

DragonRider55

The simplicity here actually kinda works. Its a cute little premise. You could use this to build something more complete... as it is it reads more like a story proposal than a finished product, but its a fun proposal.

This one just didn’t sit well with me, you appear to have a breeder kink/ obsession/ fantasy and again that’s definitely not one of my kinks at all. Another turn off. It’s a kink that I don’t understand so I try to steer well clear of it.

The concept of inventing an imaginary baby for an erotic fantasy to get aroused just feels gross to me. So no offence intended it’s just not for me.

Tess (UK)

No build-up and no detail. Just didn't work for me.

Started off well, but then it felt super rushed. Feels like a 10 chapter story where the first chapter was told normally, then then next 9 chapters were compressed into one chapter. Author could have done the escalation and change in lifestyle a bit differently.

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With all the negative commens, want to add that I liked the wholesome simplicity of this story.