by BinaryAtom
I doubt this was written by Binary Atom. I've read other stories over the years and this is something else and tense and tenor he/she has never before displayed. I have to wonder if the account has been hacked!
I couldn’t finish the first page. Past and present tense are confused. The flow feels wrong somehow. I’m sure the story has some great parts but I couldn’t read it. Needs to be edited and then reposted
I've talked with B/A and he has confirmed it's his story. Such a change in style! Ya gotta warn people there BA. LOL 😄
I'm glad it's on the up and up. I enjoy his writing and was happy yesterday to see another story posted. I wish he would write more!
WOW i have never cum so hard as i did reading this story. I have read it a few times now and still cum just as hard now as the first time i read it. Please give me more!!
Wow i loved your story so much. I have never cum so hard as i did while reading you story. I have read i a few times and cum just as hard every time. You HAVE to give me more PLEASE!!!!!
Um, this was absolutely incredible. The gradual increase in the level of intimacy they finally achieved made me so fucking hard. Incredible story. Please continue it!
Very very good story. Please do a part 2. Thank you for your time, effort, and dirty mind... tanyabrown
So many of us are anxiously awaiting a second chapter to this erotically depraved story. I hope you haven't given up on it.
Being taken like a dirty tramp by a homeless man is such a turn on!💋💋
I can't believe I just got off to this... god i feel so dirty... great story
Nice fetish story! She gets down and dirty with a homeless guy. It's great how she get off on the dirtiness of it! More!