- Incest/Taboo
- Homeward Bound
- Comments
All Comments on 'Homeward Bound'
by EdCal77
- 25 Comments
Silverfox0551over 19 years agoWell done story. Hope you plane on writing more about these charecters.
Anonymousover 19 years agoEnjoyed it, you might say ... lol
Great, a real story and lots of hot sex what more do you need.
BlueEyed5ftAngelover 19 years agoTold you it would be well received! Now get back to writing!
Anonymousover 19 years agoThis story combines great: dialogue, characters and pure raw sex. In addition to other things we hope Ed writes, we can only hope he keeps us informed of happenings with him and these two ladies. What made it an even better story was that it was obvioulsy a true recounting of a fantstic trip with them.
Anonymousover 19 years agoThe details of the ladies lives helped with the believability of the story. You are one hell of a writer.
Anonymousover 19 years agoGreat job. wonderful writing. not just the average wham bam sex story. once I started I couldn't stop reading. I gave up a couple hours of sleep to finish it. I hope you continue to include these characters in your future stories.
Anonymousover 19 years agoYou are one hell of a writer. The story is filled with all the details that make it more interesting than most of the stuff on this site.
Give us more...PLEASE
FrankWover 19 years agoPlease never stop writing. You are one of the best at this stuff I have ever read. Give us more!
C Hansenabout 19 years agoWould be nice to have more chapter. That they are married or not or what but please don't dive up a chapter and more erotic
David48almost 18 years agoTwo previously unlucky, abused ladies, finally grab the right ring and live out their wildest fantasies with a guy too amazing to believe. Life is good! A very nice, happy, sexy tale. I agree with the comments that you should continue the story of these very likable people.
CharlieLover 17 years agoWithout any question or fear of contradiction I will say this is the best story I have read on this site. Perhaps you should consider a career in writing if you aren't already in that one.
Anonymousover 17 years agoAmazingly detailed--very likeable characters...It was nice to read a story that was about people sexually pleasing each other and treating each other with tenderness, rather than the customary stories of people just getting fucked and used. And damn, the sex sounded hot!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThis is without a doubt the warmest and most tender story on this site, at least of the hundreds I have read and yet has enought sex to satisfy anyone. Ed, please keep writing although I notice you haven't submitted anything in a long long time.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoHAVING READ MOST OF THE OTHER COMMENTS WHAT MORE IS THERE TO SAY ? THANK YOU FOR GREAT READING I WILL BE LOOKING FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoA masterpiece. Most writers focus too much on the action and don't develop a proper story. Thank you and keep writing.
Anonymousover 14 years agoIf there is ever an better definition of heaven than was portrayed in this piece of prose, I hope that I'm still around to offer my challenge to the claim. This is one of the single most delightful stories that I have ever had the opportunity to enjoy. I shall remain awaiting your next effort. However, I cannot, even for a moment, believe that it is possible to improve on, "Homeward Bound".
Thank you so very much!
Michale22over 14 years agoI want to wholeheartedly thank you for a very entertaining read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Please write more, if you can.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI too agree with the comments of the other posters.I have been on Literotica for several years, and have also read hundreds of stories.If there was ever a vote taken for the best author on this site you would win hands down.Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI never dreamed that Literotica had a writer as accomplished as you. Without blowing smoke up your ass I can only say you are the best I have ever read here or on other sites as well. Please do us all a fovor and give us some more chapters or another whole story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis is a great story and reminds me of my time in the Philippines where I made friends with the mother of 3 daughters, aged 17 to 21, on my first visit I stayed at a hotel and fucked the mother every day and night, on other visits I was invited to stay at the family home, over 6 months and 4 visits I had all 3 daughters in bed fucking me, they were the most beautiful family I ever met ,,
cowboy01r01over 4 years agoI loved your story just enough sex not really over done but well balanced only thing i could say shame that they did not get married i think it would have been a eve better ending they were all three made for each other.
