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All Comments on 'Honeymoon at the Cabin Ch. 01'

by LMP_Jessilin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting plot...

I hope you have more chapters on the way.

This definitely has potential.

Interesting to read a story where the characters have more in mind than just a quick fuck.

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
A good start. I like your style- smooth

The older writers know that things work better if done smoothly. It's life and experience.

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