All Comments on 'Honeymoon in Paradise Ch. 01'

actuallly very good. Keep writting. Hope they make a fourssome on the next story which you publish very soon

Want to read about a Natalie's DP with Carlos and Kurt. Can't wait.

i liked the story, but why say in the intro that the enjoy each other and strangers when they do nothing with anyone but each other? I'm sure since this is marked ch.01 that the "strangers" part will come in the following chapters, but you should not have said that in the description of this chapter

Great writing. I hate when an author takes a long time to lead up to the sex and then the actual act is only 2 sentences! Please continue with more chapters. I love MMF and MM action, so I hope your Honeymoon story includes some of these.

Great story, look forward to more of their adventures..

hey everyone. thank you for all your positive feedback. this is the first time i've done this, so it was very exciting to read what you had to say. i promise to continue on this story soon, i've just been very busy. stay tuned!