All Comments on 'Honeymoon with My Sister Pt. 01'

Next chapter please. I like the story but it needs to be continued. AAAA++++

Great start, good build up. More please he needs to fill her with seed and make her his forever.

Getting exciting. Don’t forget to eat her pussy.

Good intro, good first story. Incest is not one of my kinks, but very well done

I struggled with your use of commingled: it's not wrong but tends to be used in a technical context. I work with commingled bones: not the image you are trying to convey.

I need atleast 2 more chapters of this

Excellent story please keep it going

Great start. So many ways this can go. Good luck. Please keep going with this

You nearly lost me after the mistake a few lines in. But I struck with it and I'm glad I did. A four star effort and building to five with the next part. Thanks for writing.

Excellent beginning, hopefully there's more to come?

Thank you.

Fantastic start!

More, soon, please!

Looking forward to more!

(And, BTW, I had no problem with your use of "commingled". Neither would Webster's or Oxford. It is not primarily a technical term. ag2507 apparently is a forensic anthropologist, but not many of us are..)

I enjoyed your story quite a lot. Please continue with more chapters. Can’t wait to read what’s coming next…

Definitely a good start, good build up, nothing was rushed, keep them coming, a couple more parts at least

That was a wonderful start, well written with a good build up.

Please continue.

Thank you...

This is such a hot story. Excited for part 2

Excellent. You must continue.......

5 Stars.

Great start! Please keep going.

What a great start for both you and the story

justa as it should be.

can't keep him and her straight, even for the opening plot hook? No point in bothering with the rest of this shit show. Also, got a love ag2507 comparing about the use of a word, while spelling it incorrectly, and twice at that, in his comment.

Sibling sex is special, hot. They should take full advantage of the newlywed / honeymoon package.

Enjoyed. Please continue.

Great story and fun to read. Go slow and tease your readers jajaja 5

Can’t wait to read more. Fantastic build up

Great story I’m sure the next chapters will be as good if not better then the first. Thank you

Great start, but for sure awaiting for more!

He scooped her up out of the hot tub and then they both collapse into the bed and fall asleep...still soaking wet with wet boxer underwear on Dean and wet panties on Autumn. I don't think that you gave much thought to your ending. 4/5

Wonderful .. I am hot and wet waiting for the next chapter .. that is how I feel with my fiancé 💕 you are an amazing writer .. please continue 😘

For a story with no sex this one was more than boring. Better luck next time.

Great start. Don't let the negative comments get you down. You have a good beginning here. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

Of all the incest genres I'm a big fan of the mother/son relationships. But I can see the potential for some interesting developments for this brother and his sister. If they both fall in love with each other, and they do become lovers then him getting her pregnant is open for discussion. I know if I'm about to slide my big cock in my sister's wet pussy you can bet that I will ask her if it is safe for me to cum in. Or I could take on the direct approach and tell her that man in in me would love nothing more than to cum in her and fuck my baby in her.

Great start. Can’t wait to see where it goes. Hopefully they come back from the honeymoon with a typical honeymoon surprise.

Great job! I hope you keep going. Write what you want and feel without worrying about fulfilling someone else's fantasy. They can write their own story for that.

To the negative commenters: I'd much rather have a story with a "Ch. 1" in the title, CLEARLY stating that it's the start of a series, than having the protagonists going at it on page 1.

To the author, you did a wonderful job here. What a start to being on Lit! I'll keep my eyes peeled for the following chapters for sure. 👍

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ !

Great start looking forward to more.

Good story really enjoyed it , Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing it

Great story. Looking for more story of the siblings

Oh I need more of this story!

A very good story. Looking for next part.

When they go back home, do they see each other, remain a couple?

Can't wait for more of this story.

You called her him. You can't proof read for yourself, someone else has to do it.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!