All Comments on 'Honour Among Thieves'

by General_Picton

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

Very enjoyable story.

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 6 years ago
Chapter 2

Where Rachel comes back and asks him to be her daddy. It would be awesome.

airgodairgodover 6 years ago
Great read

I second Ellienora. Have one or more of them come back.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
FORCED SEX AND CIRCUMSTANCE

why is this different from Rape, TK U MLJ LV NV

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 6 years ago
slaves?

at one point he said they would be his slaves. he should have made them clean up the mess they made. will the story go on? maybe the girls will return to be his willing love slaves maybe even moving in with him or whatever

General_PictonGeneral_Pictonalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

I do have a second chapter sketched out for this, but it is always so hard to find time to write so I don’t know when it will get done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Brilliant stuff

This deserves a sequel.

bigreddog543bigreddog543almost 4 years ago
part 2

since you have dropped the idea about a second chapter, don't keep us waiting too long.

ArediaArediaover 2 years ago

I look forward to that second chapter. :)

mish2mashmish2mashover 1 year ago

Great story, the dynamic between the girls was interesting.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This story lives rent free in my head. I loved the dynamic between the girls. I'm still hoping for a second chapter. Again focusing on the girls dynamic.

I have this idea of Nikka and Rachel contacting the man with a plan to trick Kaitlyn back to the house. Something about them being tired of Kaitlyn's queen bee attitude, but being scared of saying something to her directly out of fear of loosing their own 'social status'. And them wanting to explore different things sexually. Maybe they even send a list of things they want to try?

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