by CallMeMrBrooks
Very, very HOT story but spoiled to some degree for me by the frequent spelling and punctuation mistakes. I'd suggest reading it aloud and revising it as you go. Would make a very good story even better !
But, very curious to know if Miguel and our gay hero get together again. Perhaps Miguel's wife arrives when they are together ?
I thought it was great story. I'm a bit confused why some of the commentors are claiming this story is in the wrong category. Sure it's gay, but it is anal too.
I would love to respond to all the comments individually, but I'm not that savvy of a user...yet:) I will say THANK YOU for the feedback about punctuation and grammar, good call!
Secondly, for those saying that this is posted in the wrong category, please understand the hetero-normative privilege in the subtext of what your statement suggests.
I think that if you have a separate category for gay stories, it is very important that you have one for hetero stories as well. And other categories that represent the spectrum.
I would love to drop my email for those that want to reach me personally but I don't know if that's allowed. There's plenty more to tell! Thanks for being here.
I do like it when men come in to peoples asses it is so kinky i would love to have that happen to me
Gay, anal isn’t important. It’s a wonderful story..…I also totally love descriptions of being anally penetrated…how hot it feels, how it makes me feel so so gay…I could only be a bottom and I fantasize of being taken forcibly taken and when he ejaculates repeatedly in my ass…I simply beg him to marry me… I’d want to be his rich bitch…
JT