All Comments on 'Hookup at the Family Reunion: Pt. 01'

Plot is looking good. However, get it proofread by someone else.

Dropped bait all over, then didn't catch anything!

Please pay attention to the previous comment too.

is this a pre teen story? on wrong site

Not a bad start. Hope it gets hot!

She was also my type. Was probably one of the reasons why I even have a type. pleasure made flesh. My (step)mama. Mama Joy. Not my mama. She's too sexy.