All Comments on 'Horny Cocksucker'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Quoatation marks are NOT optional

'nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
re: Quoatation marks are NOT optional

I know, I know. I should have written "Quotation marks are NOT optional".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This is a very good story and hope you will write another chapter ! We need to she wants to do to Keith next. What does he want to do that Lisa won't do ??

Thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Story, Badly Written

Please pick a tense and stick with it! At the very least, don't change tenses in the same sentence. Also, most people nod their head for "yes" and shake their head for "no." There's a good idea here, it's just hidden by bad writing.

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