All Comments on 'Flirty Holiday Hot Tub Party'

Great story! hope to see more.

Good clean fun, great read, off to the resort?

HOT!!!

Filthy and hot, great pace and tons of detail.. was going to say it reminds me of a hot tub party I once attended, but nothing like this happened!

Fuck that was hot. Would love to see swapping next time

Loved the story, and all the details!

Great story! I really want you to continue it with the same excellent descriptions of the characters and their physical characteristics. Perhaps even with the bisexual undertones of this hot, arousing orgy! ..

Niiiiiiccceeeee. I could really identify with the party, given the vivid detail. Great job. Let’s hear about the resort???

Good story, but some silly mistakes. Ask an editor to look at your stories.

Absolutely abominable writing! Sounds like (and probably is) an amateur. Also no story, no plot, no character development. Garbage.