All Comments on 'Hostess'

by drrtymined

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Proofread before posting. Instead of Rose, you first called her iris.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I suppose this may attract and entertain some easily pleased readers, but as a story it's very unoriginal and derivative.

adlonadlonabout 1 month ago

Very derivative. Halfway through I felt like I'd read this story too many times on here, not very original in any way

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