All Comments on 'Hostile Witness Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Susan may finally understand now that this is her life. She should resign herself to adapting to her new world and stay alive. Are the slaves shaved regularly or do they all go natural and what about long term birth control? Since the slaves don't seem to leave on their own are they ever permanently marked either branded, tats, or piercings? Please continue this series is getting better. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

An absurd premise requires action to reward the reader for their suspension of disbelief. Otherwise... it gets a bit boring

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Loving getting the ideas in my head out for you to enjoy. If you have a suggestion add it in a comment, I have incorporated reader suggestions in previous stories.

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