All Comments on 'Hot Blood'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
hot blood - hot story

love the descriptions, really gives the scene a sense of life. the little details, such as the scents, really creates an extra dimension. look forward to reading more by you :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i do so hope you finish

it seems there is more story hiding between the lines of this piece of work hope you fish it out and write it as this is sweet and can become better keep it up.

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