All Comments on 'Hot Chocolate'

You did it again Tina! I loved it! Shahira is super hot and I can’t wait for her and Casey to live happily ever after

awesome again , loved this story . please chapter 2 ? . thank you

Please let Part 2 come soon!

Back at it again with making me question my fragile heterosexuality! "Jokes" aside, good work as always.

Holy shit that was way too hot!

I read the first two thousand words and thought it was a little pedestrian but assumed when Shahira appeared that things would hot up, but it continued in the same vein. It is well written, as is all your work, but lacked the spark that you usually produce. Not one of your best, unfortunately, although I appreciate the hours you spent on it. However, I will still follow your work.

Absolutely incredible I get so excited when I see your name pop up. Great work per usual!

It is so hard to pick my favorite story of yours, but this is way up there. The erotic tension you build between these two is so hot, and I love how their sexuality feeds off of each other. Excellent!

one of your weaker stories. would love to see you revisit some of your older series that havent been completed yet. thanks for sharing.

I hope the story picks up a little. I can't wait to read the scene where he loses his virginity

Loved it! 5/5! Easily!