All Comments on 'Hot Day of Golf'

I hate it when the cart girl dies. It just fucks up the entire round of golf.

I didn't bother to read this crap, if you can't do enough editing to catch such a glaring mistake in the title it isn't worth my time. I also didn't score it with the one star it deserved.

Puzzle for your readers. Take this descriptive line you posted: "Bev cart girl dies more than serve drinks." Now, change only ONE word in that sentence, and have it make some kind of sense. Good luck. At least doesn't die? other than that, the usual skank story.

Thank you!!! "'That'll be $4.00.' I gave her $6.00, for a $2.00 tip." So many other writers on this site cause me to interrupt my furious masturbation to reach for my calculator at points like this in the story, but you did the arithmetic for us and allowed me to stroke all the way through.

Funny how the haters are anonymous.