by watchdwag
This is a very hot, and romantically fizzy-sweet, conclusion to this delightful little tale! So sad it's already over! but there is much to cheer about. What a long way our Chel has come along, so fast!
One of the best pieces I've ever read. What about another chapter depicting them seducing Jennifer and the wedding?
CLAP, CLAP, ClAP
A wonderful conclusion to a really great series. Keep on writing and best of luck with your next story.
siply put what a awsome story. like everyone else can`t wait for the seduction of jennifer and the wedding let`s have the soon
I loved the character development. The connections that developed between the characters were delicious. There were some pesky technical problems, but they didn't take much away from the sexiness, the developing relationships or the intensity of Michelle's self-realization.
I had not thought of it, but after reading some other comments, I also encourage you to write about Denise, Michelle and Jennifer. Take your time, as you did with this series. Let us see a real seduction, without the interference of drugs. Draw out the simple joy of building a friendship, of touches that linger a bit too long, of fierce friendship comforting and protecting, of growing affection and forbidden attraction. Give it all to us. -God, now I really want it.
I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel involving Jennifer and how that pans out.
Loved it...Great how you tied this series in with the Babysitter series. I always loved Kat and Taylor wished there was more.....fabulous!
I have to say that while the story is very hot, I was a little disappointed that there was no character development. She went from being a completely straight engaged women and in 15 minutes with some nipple clamps, a buttplug, and a flogger, Lisa and Susan were able to turn her into a lesbian? I get more upset when a waiter gets my order wrong than she did being drugged, kidnapped, and raped!
Written beautifully and allowing the readers to feel like they are there and can envision, especially us women who are dominant in nature, the entire evolution of events. It is very true what the earlier commenter said regarding character development since it was almost an instantaneous metamorphosis from straight to lesbian but sometimes it does happen.
I would LOVE for you to write a story of this style and general theme where the wife is a mature mother of 3 children who have grown up and moved away and her husband, albeit very successful, is away on business a great deal of time. She has taken incredible care of herself and is still beautiful and very fit. She is seduced much like in this story when hubby is away and becomes so enamored with this new lifestyle, she cuckolds him so at home she is still totally in the service of her lesbian dominant(s), at least one of which is younger than her daughter. Hubby can only watch unless.................
Great story, great writing, great imagination..............
wow that was one hell of a story... it was well written and full of passion. had me going hehehe
This is an interesting series and I'd like to see how they seduce Jennifer into this. So I really hope you do a sequel.
Love the name choice, made the reveal obvious, but that's a good thing for me.
This was such hot series!!!! I could not wait to turn the page. Hope you write a sequel about Jennifer!!!
One of the best series I have read here at literotica, seriously! You have talent. This would make a great base for a “actual plot “ porno movie or a “Arts Film”, but if yo ever do, please do not go vanilla! Cheers!
Great story! Loved the ending too.
Perhaps you can bring them back at some point, letting your readers know how it went with Jennifer and even adding a 4th to the mix - introduce some diversity to the mix.
This is a HOT story! Michelle and Denise and Jennifer are Teachers I'd love to have me also