by SPEN STERLING
Oh wow! It was sexy and fun, and funny. And the writing was great. Do more like this.
Dude I was bored, this was rated hot, I thought Why not? Boy am I glad I read this. I agree with ms. Webb, write more like this. And I'll be reading all your stuff when I can.
hey, Spen. I really like your writing. It 's very hot. I think this one is my favorite. Keep up the good work!
David (beachbirdguy)
I've just discovered you. Love your style, scenarios and imagination. Don't stop.
You made an old man very happy with this story, just love your writing, have put you on my favourite writers list.
5*****'s
Your stories are fun to read and still very sexy! You keep them short and sweet, which happens to be how I like them. That said, short in no way should be confused with uninventive. I just discovered you, so I'm catching up on your past submissions for the time being and enjoyed everyone so far. But I am happy to admit I enjoyed Clothing Optional Day at the Beach the most so far ;) Your scenarios are exciting and fresh. Thank you and I look forward to reading your new submissions too.
Very clever, and hot. Not an easy balance. And not easy to write with both internal and external dialogues, but you did it. Really super story.