All Comments on 'Hot Potato'

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Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessover 10 years ago
really sweet

And wish there was more!

SkylarFallingSkylarFallingover 10 years ago
Yes please :)

Can we have some more please? I like these two. :)

Dreaming318Dreaming318over 10 years ago
Keep going...

Lovely story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More...

We need more of this story.

Write, write, write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Would love to see more

I'd like to see this as a possible series, maybe have them transition together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

please write some more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Really Cute Story!

This story was really cute and romantic and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I hope you write more to it as this is easily one of my favourites that I've read on here. I love the emotional development of the characters and would love to read a series of this.

Bert_FeggBert_Feggabout 10 years ago
Lovely story

Thought provoking, really well written, and easily worth five stars - Shame it wasn't longer.

EranthesPetEranthesPetabout 10 years ago
Love the writing style!

This is fantastic! You have a great writing style; light, flirty and fun while still very sexy! More please?

ShyTammyShyTammyover 9 years ago
I Love it

I would love to hear more of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing!

Very well written, and very hot. I love your story, gender swapping always gets me excited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Better every time I read it

I've read this story several times and it seriously just gets better every time I read it. Can you please write more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow

I loved it, it's warm and tender, thank you for sharing!!!!

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawa12 months ago

A wonderfully written story, it fully represents me as if I am. You put it very interestingly how it is when you are physically a boy and emotionally a girl and vice versa when you are naturally a girl and emotionally, mentally a boy. Warmly, gently, very emotionally you wrote this story. Thank you, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📝❤️ 🧒 👧🏻

Wspaniale napisana historia, w pełni przedstawia jakby Mnie samą. Bardzo ciekawie ująłeś jak to jest gdy się jest chłopakiem fizycznie a emocjonalnie dziewczyną i na odwrót gdy się jest naturalnie dziewczyną a emocjonalnie, psychicznie chłopakiem. Ciepło, delikatnie bardzo uczuciowo napisałeś tą historię. Dziękuję, czekam na dalszą część tej historii. SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📝 ❤️ 🧒 👧🏻

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