All Comments on 'HOT SHOTS: M.I.L.F Spring Break Ch. 06'

As always, something truly amazing...and truly batshit. Please keep up the good work.

If you continue this story, can Shawn at some point start to straighten his shit out? After a while it is exhausting to see the same spineless behavior over and over.

It's been hard posting things on a site we have received comments about the correct height of a character and among other things someone's opinion of a character Arc. I really miss the old days when people would comment or write me about the characters that they read, about the ones that I created that I thought I did a good job of creating an atmosphere with this story. But I suppose it was found wanting. So I guess I'm just going to take my time writing on this site; right now things aren't looking so good in the real world and this stuff doesn't help. Someone has actually written me yelling at me for not listing a character height accurately.

This is disheartening to a certain degree especially considering. I like to thank all of the people written me made some decent comments and positive and negative and read my stories. Thank you.

By the way I made this, using the microphone on my Android so please forgive any spelling errors or verbal misnomers.

Cant wait for the next one, hope you write it soon.

Where is the next part..ohh that is frustrating!!!! The little schmuck was finally finding himself and coming into his own and it just ends right there..Fuck!!!!!!

Hey I hope the next part is coming soon

Glad I found this, abit different in the storyline, but I hope we can read more please.

Read all 6 parts up to this point. Also read your comment on the comments of others. In regards to the comments of others, I can only say they do not speak for all commenters. What you have created here is a story that has multiple facets of creativity. As I began reading, I got caught up in the storyline, rating each chapter but not taking the time to comment. I wanted to get to the next chapter as quickly as I could. I was not disappointed. With each new chapter, I was pulled farther into the story you so creatively crafted. I hope any additional chapter(s) will have the same 'pull'. I rate this as I have rated all the others. 5🌟 Rockhardick.

Well written. Creative story. Where’s the rest of the story?