All Comments on 'Hot Springs Pt. 01'

want more, need more, do it!

Beware you unfortunate man, this is one seriously fucked up woman and I think he will realize this before long,

Damn good start. Chapter 2 was a little confusing. Was she telling him about her past or was that just for the benefit of the readers? The background was interesting, but ended up having little effect on the rest of the story. Otherwise though kudos on your first story and I look forward to the next part.

soon, please.

You have a rare gift for first person wit. A welcome addition to this site. Please keep posting.

Might be even better if it was finished. Its been quite a while, probably not going to finish are you?