All Comments on 'Hot Summer Days'

by DracnKitten

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cheryl_4funcheryl_4funover 12 years ago
yes

good one, look forward to more, she is hooked now

darkknight01darkknight01over 12 years ago
A Hot and Passionate Read

Thanks so much for such a wonder and sexy story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

beachcomber02666beachcomber02666over 11 years ago
very sexy

I love the setting of a beautiful woman swimming nude in the cool lake. Well-witten and the interracial touch was added another layer of eroticism. Good job

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

While it was a very hot story, something bothered me. The lake was deep enough that they had to tread water to stay afloat. But when they came together, they wrapped their arms and legs around each other. Hand were exploring and not treading water. They would have sunk like a rock. I know, silly point, but I have been in that situation and it’s not good until you reach a point where you both can stand. Other than that, good story.

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Hello there! I'm a 39 year old author and retired fetish model. I love writing, especially erotica, and I LOVE hearing from people who have read my stories. I am currently slow in writing stories for Literotica because I have begun working on a couple of erotic novels, and ...