All Comments on 'Hot times and the Hammy Skillet'

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rjordanrjordanabout 9 years ago
Nice twist

Enjoyed the story. Great build up and a nice twist to finish it.

yowseryowserabout 9 years ago
Imaginative

You had me w/ some great dialogue, authentic AND funny:"And there is third option, where Jasmine doesn't get laid and neither do you. In fact, that is the most likely alternative, don't you think?"

Very clever.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
very Song of Solomon

I just wonder whether or not they are wearing their habits or not?

Cause if they are...the waitress would have gossip enough for a month of Sundays!

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Not a professional writer, just like to exercise the brain from time to time. Writing these stories is like putting a puzzle together, making all the pieces fit. The topics I write about almost always start with a 'what if...' and then the words flow from there. I guess, th...